Voted For: Da UFC

LoL Nice
vote>>UFC
wordplay>5.5/10
scheme>6/10
punches>7/10
Mr.Smoky
wordplay>3/10
scheme>??/10
punches>0.10

This was feedback posted for smokey817
 

weak battle...Checking polls..........

Voted For: Da UFC

Aii This Battle wasnt All dat lemme show you

You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight
But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site
1st Line ..>Sucked ...second line made me laugh
Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot
This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot
1st Line....>sucked Second line was Aii
Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit
You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit
Ok Verse in Total Your first lines werent all dat good you need to work on having your 1st line lead into your second line which is your pucn which will make You pucnh much stronger

Smokey817
..................> Wack <......................

And DonT take it to offense when I say

Give up Your Rap Life

Voted For: Da UFC

-Da UFC-
You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight
But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site
^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good opener, 1st line was a little weak

Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot
This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot
^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good wordplay, just not hard enough

Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit
You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit
^^^^ 6/10 1st line is a self glory setup, wasnt feeling the hit, not a good closer

22/30 = %73


-smokey817-

smokey i can't vote using a percentage cause i cant find ya bars or lines...what i can say
nothing rhymes, a lot of self glory, hits weren't hard, structure was bad...sorry

no hate, just honest opinion



Vote: Da UFC

thankz fo da votez homiez!

i appreciate dat shit fo real!!!!!!!!

Voted For: smokey817

didnt really like either of these verses. but, this one seemed better to me.

roflz, dis dude aint know what hes talkin about fo real