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Voted For: Kein Witz

votin for kein


ight very close battle, it deserves to be voted on

im gonna havta give it to Kein though he had more extreme personals in his verse and his punches were harder

Kein
Ya had nice set of punches, most were creative, ya flow was good although ur strucutre was a lil messed up wit a long line or 2. Ya wordplay was good and ya vocab skills was nice as well and i like ya multies

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I was looking for a pro battle, and this lame ass faggots the only one who humored me.
Never here "pumpkin on audio", because this stupid shit is still struggling with puberty.
(lol hard punch, very nice and personal)

Lfs
ight man u had the strucutre, it was nioce and easy to read, ya flow was on the dot, multies were descent, ya wordplay was a lil basic but u had a creative twist to it so ima say wordplay was descent. Ya vocab skills were a lil shot in this verse i seen u come alot more creative in previous battles

I wasnt feelin you opener fam, nah wrong way to start a battle
ya punches wernt that hard, most jus funny but i look for the WHOAH style punches man, ya personals were alright but couldnt make up for ya punches

so kein gonna take this by the skin of his teeth with better harder punches


very good battle fams,


BE SURE TO RTF
link below sig

make em explained

Thanks for the votes...we need to get this finished up here. =D

Voted For: Kein Witz

Punches-KW.
Wit-KW.
Metaphors-KW.
Overall KW had a better verse, harder hitting punche's compared to LFS.
RTF in my sig KW.

Voted For: Pumpkin Head

Listen here fag, this may not be halloween, but I've got this shit "in the bag".
Don't brag, the only time you get a "pat on the back" is when you're "playing tag".
6/10...good punches on both lines, nice opener..structure was bad though
It's easy to tell my rhymes confuse him easily because his "head is hollow".
Studying a tardling's anatomy I'll "carve up this bitch", to see the "red that follows."
6/10...okay punches bad structure
Trust me, you suck but I can be optimistic --- I see it's fucking "half of a cup".
The probability of you winning this match? Better chance seeing "Roseanne do a pull-up".
6/10...good punches again but bad structure
I was looking for a pro battle, and this lame ass faggots the only one who humored me.
Never here "pumpkin on audio", because this stupid shit is still struggling with puberty.
5/10...wack
23/40
58%
work on your structure and flow, nice punches throughout but your structure and flow were terrible

Once again an LFS battle comin straight at ya computer screen,
I'm in a battle with Kein Witz but his wits seem not to be keen,*
6/10...decent opener
It's good that he has self-esteem, but he over-extended himself,
But from the info in his profile, he's unknown even to himself,**
6/10...decent
His chances of winning is low, similar to 50 Cent's sperm count,***
We know he didn't buy a ghost write, he doesn't have a bank account,
7/10...good
Whoo here we go, I sense it, my verse is startin to get a little hectic,
I like this dude but his decision skills show that he isn't too eclectic,****
5/10..eehh
Sorry but you shoulda stayed in the closet like old-fashioned murphy beds,
Cuz in the end of the battle 'I stand alone' amidst the 'Puddles Of Red',*****
7/10...good personals and werdplay
Hate to break it to ya but me losin to battle is not happenin, it's taboo,
Dictatin my verse like Adolf Hitler, you take the role of the wanderin Jew,******
6/10...good punch but bad structure
Simply put I'm better than you, but don't worry I won't rub it in too badly,
But if you ask for another shot at me, I'll offer you the rematch, gladly....
5/10...eehh
42/70
60%
decent verse but try to pick better werds and also try not to have fillers or bars that dont ahve punches at all

opener:kw
closer:kw
punches:LFS
personals:LFS
flow:LFS
structure:LFS
vocab:tie
multies:tie

v/LFS

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Uppin' for some more votes...close battle right here. Missed that vote by 2%.

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checkin polls.................................... dope lfs

i know...i know....thx morse i'll rtf....uppin for more votes

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Come on. Let's get some votes in here, peeps......

what he, or I said lol

Voted For: Pumpkin Head

I an't racest but i like the wandering jew thing, and 50's sperm count

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witz gets this win, but it was kinda close...both had some nice shit