uppin.............................................

uppin this battle....................... :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for ~Lady Fiya~
 

Hem- Alright. This was good Piece you wrote here, I liked your appproach, creative and decent. The best aspect iny our verse the Imagery. The emotion lacked in your piece. Vocab needs to be upp. Really there isn't much to say, just upp on emotion and vocabs. The imagery was good from the top to the bottom, but you need emotions sometimes to win topicals.

Lady-Fiyah. I liked your approach too, it was good very decent story-Like. The imagery was good, portraiting every detail. The emotion was not weak not all good but average. You had a great balance in your vocab. Keep writing and upp the emotion, next time use metaphors to expand your emotion and sometimes for the imagery. Good drop.

Overall= hard decension, but i'mma have to go with Lady Fiyah, she had good imagery, but also had little pimple of emotion. Which hem didnt have, he had str8 forward imagery, which was decent, but no emotion, couldnt tell how the character was feeling. But I did on lady fiyah piece. Vote/ Lady fiyah...Peace

Ahhhh I can't vote because I dont have 1,000 post..shit lol uh yeah this just a feedback then.

This was feedback posted for ~Lady Fiya~
 

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^alright K-Trini.. *claps* you done yet? but uhm, uppin... :thumbup:

why in the hell is this still open? People don't vote now-a-days... ~_~ this makes just bout no sense.

This was feedback posted for ~Lady Fiya~
 

This battle si too fucking close for me to even attempt to vote on

Voted For: Hemz

fuck lady fiya.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for ~Lady Fiya~
 

meh im not goin to vote cause im lazy but damn upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

This was feedback posted for Hemz
 

good battlez.....Checkin pollz.......................