This was feedback posted for Cassius_Clay
 

nly chekin polls,elevate homie,cuz this wasint very good

Voted For: D-Rock

Battling me homie i'll make it so u cant chew ya beef
Cuz im a grab my air pistol and target pratice ya teeth/
Pluck one by one u gonna need some dentures
my opponenets i bleed and injure........../
Homie should of duck dis date cuz its a Classic Day
Cuz i'll make u look retarted, as if u was current day Cassius Clay/
You must not know me boy cuz nigga i smash Crews
I dont consider you beef nigga cuz u nuffin fast food/
And keep fuckin nigga have ya mans dead
and i'll allow u to clap back untill ya hands red/
i'll shoot ya ankles boy havin u rock red socks man
You'll get fucked up in NY cuz niggas thought u was a red sox fan/
And everybody know u scared to go to Teens Night at da Club
Cuz you'll will get more wet like you tried to squeese tight in da tub/
There no use of u dissin cuz i know wat you'll pop
U gonna rhymes some tired shit that goes Wit D-Rock/
Maybe like D-Rock D-Block sucks on D-Cock
I got better rhymes from when i was 10 up in my stashspot/
And i seen ya bluebrint dis wasnt even worth my time
You can be a pop star,but compared to me you wont shine/
So go ahead take ya time,cuz u aint gonna drop on a dime
Unless i start poppin droppin clips from my 9/
And im gonna be around even after dis battle's over
Even if i retire im gonna stick around Like Hova.

=8/10 A REALLY GOOD VERSE A BIT TO LONG BUT VERY GOOD.......

VS

This is a battle...an dude fell for tha Bait
Shouldve told em wait
Cuz this kid still lookin ta vets on R.V. ta try nElevate!!!
He got hell ta face...but tha kid still beggin
Hes a nobody...really!...just look at tha replies on Livin Legends!
folks dont want U here on R.V....look at ur Verses
I dont know which 1's tha worsest
Tha name sucks alone...an thats just on tha surface
Im tha greatest...to you..thats where tha line stops
Call me tha rappin Tyrone Biggums
cuz I just smoked up this Dime Rock(D-Rock..Get it!)
Fuck it!!...Folks know my lines Kill
Im real
This is ah miss match like Ricky Smiley against Seinfield!!

=6.5/10 A OK VERSE.........U NEED 2 IMPROVE UR STRUCTURE ALOT..........

V/Young Dollar

Man josh u need toshut up callin people net rappers cuz homie u doin da same stuff......uppin for votes

Voted For: D-Rock

Overall a semi-good verse,50/50
wordplay was good
punches,not many but what i seen was good
vocab was basic,rhymed nicely tho
structure was readable
opener was honestly weak
closer was nicely done n worded

This was feedback posted for Cassius_Clay
 

wats all the huff about.......

This was feedback posted for D-Rock
 

polls.............................................

Voted For: D-Rock

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uppin for votes come on give ya boy a winn and vote..................VOTE OR DIE BITCHES

This was feedback posted for D-Rock
 

stop writing books. this might be open for a while. no im not reading this battle because of your long ass verse.

Voted For: D-Rock

Vote-D-Rock, it was close 2 me at first but then i started reading deeper into it and he was smashin Cassius.

Homie should of duck dis date cuz its a Classic Day
Cuz i'll make u look retarted, as if u was current day Cassius Clay/
That was a sick line and
i'll shoot ya ankles boy havin u rock red socks man
You'll get fucked up in NY cuz niggas thought u was a red sox fan/
For those 2 lines i give my vote 2 D-Rock

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