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Voted For: Daubs
Bitch, you couldnt get a fuck if you rolled wit prossies and whores..... Your such a pussy, even ya name is armoured ...........with underscores! Claim you poppin pills and shit, thats why in ya location your so high.. But couldnt be above me,............if you were a star up in the sky!!!! This joker couldnt drop hot if he were a card and fell on a heater.. Cant fuck wit ya set?.....i could, im an educational teacher!!!!!!! =7/10 AN OK VERSE NOT DA BEST IVE SEEN FROM DAUBS........ vs im da type ta merk u when i spit-sir...and fightin imma SteeL-er like da team in pitts-burgh ya verses dont hurt me,only make-me-laugh...plus ya flows is like Ciggerette Smoke they make-me-gag u's Trash similar ta the Stuff-0n-Tha-Curb...u Broke,i get Cash pitchin Stuff-0n-Tha-Curb(crack) =4/10 WOT A CRAP VERSE.....U NEED TO IMPROVE YOUR STRUCTURE AND RHYMIN AND VOCAB......... V/DAUBS, FOR HAVING A BETTER VERSE FULL STOP. |
Voted For: Daubs
Daubs- your verse overall was good...your punches were just plain better..they all hit hard n were funny some what...your structure was good, easy to read n all...but overall 7.5/10 ...for an overall better punches and structure... Jooksta- Your verse was aight...but your punches just didnt hit hard or nothing...your structure could be better...and overall 5.9/10...You need to elevate kid...but you'll elevate cuz i see skills within you peace... |
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