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Daubs 05-14-05 07:20 PM

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13th. 05-15-05 03:47 AM

Voted For: Daubs

Bitch, you couldnt get a fuck if you rolled wit prossies and whores.....
Your such a pussy, even ya name is armoured ...........with underscores!

Claim you poppin pills and shit, thats why in ya location your so high..
But couldnt be above me,............if you were a star up in the sky!!!!

This joker couldnt drop hot if he were a card and fell on a heater..
Cant fuck wit ya set?.....i could, im an educational teacher!!!!!!!
=7/10 AN OK VERSE NOT DA BEST IVE SEEN FROM DAUBS........

vs

im da type ta merk u when i spit-sir...and fightin imma SteeL-er like da team in pitts-burgh

ya verses dont hurt me,only make-me-laugh...plus ya flows is like Ciggerette Smoke they make-me-gag

u's Trash similar ta the Stuff-0n-Tha-Curb...u Broke,i get Cash pitchin Stuff-0n-Tha-Curb(crack)
=4/10 WOT A CRAP VERSE.....U NEED TO IMPROVE YOUR STRUCTURE AND RHYMIN AND VOCAB.........

V/DAUBS, FOR HAVING A BETTER VERSE FULL STOP.

Wicked One 05-15-05 01:44 PM

Voted For: Daubs

Daubs- your verse overall was good...your punches were just plain better..they all hit hard n were funny some what...your structure was good, easy to read n all...but overall 7.5/10 ...for an overall better punches and structure...

Jooksta- Your verse was aight...but your punches just didnt hit hard or nothing...your structure could be better...and overall 5.9/10...You need to elevate kid...but you'll elevate cuz i see skills within you peace...


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