This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

both verses i would say arent bad...itd be close to call...some good punches..

Voted For: Young Blaze

aight young blaze take dis cuz i neva herd of jersey b n da worste place eva

young blaze- aight u had sum good punches good punches u started ya verse off like me u had sum good multies n ya verse da verse wasnt stretched everi line followed da next u had sum aight personals it was kool dont stretch ya line like dat 1 u did keep dem all da same u had a good openor it was a lil dull n between but u had a good closer 2 match it

o.s.b-yo man ya shit was good n da begginin dat was a nice personal/punch it was sum good punches n ya verse and sum personal but dat jersey personal was fake neva herd of sumbodi say dat ya verse was balanced jus like young blaze but he came harder den u n dis battle u had a good openor sum of da middle was kinda trash but da closer was aight

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hmm....seems like a hate vote.....cuz he said somethin bad about NJ.......thats stupid to vote for another person because they made a punchline degrading NJ.......

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uppin for my wigga OSB...whitey can rap for real..damn the racism is rhick lol...he knows i'm messin wit him...i hope

uppin for shits sake..... being slept on like crazy... Good battle too

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

this was a pretty okay battle but ima have to give this one to One Step Beyond, to me he came harder

Younge
Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
Nice decent opener
Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
Ha nice punchline
Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
Dope
In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
Nope
Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
Ah.. filler
U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage…. (5-5 50%)
Shaq shoots like 40 % at freethrows..So no

OneStep Beyond
Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
Nice decent opener
Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
Decent.. sorta filler
This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
Nice punchline , good mutlies
I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
Eh...Decent
B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
Nice punchline
Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...
LOL, nice closer

Pretty close battle but ima have to give this one to One Step Beyond... young came good but i just feel that One step came alittle harder... Keep it up both

vote- One Step Beyond

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage….

Yo Da Punchez Wuz ILL, Dat Closer ''Da Free Throw Percentage'' Wuz Sum Sick Azz Wordplay,. But U Lacked ALOT Ov Personalz, U Tried 2 Play Da Battle Out Wit Consistantly Dropping Punches Wit No Personalz, Maybe If U Had Mixed n Switched Yo Style Up Thru Out Da Verse, U Wuld Ov Got Mah Vote

Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...

Yo Dat Verse Wuz Tite, U Used Personalz An Da Metahpours Wuz Flawless Dawg, U Hit Him Hard, ''U Better Check Yo Head Man, Like Wearin A Nike Hat'' Dat Iz Fiyah Man, OnStepBeyond Came Real Hard An Hiz Verse Had Everythin Frum Humour, 2 Wit Rite Down 2 Da Personalz, Flow Wuz Rite On Point

Vote/OnrStepBeyond

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature

Vote switched

^ may wanna get that fixed....ts 3-1 OSB now....uppin fo mo

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