To the roof!!!!

damn Black lemme get on a remix to this lol...hot shit bruh....

Beat is nice, lyrics are cool, ya flow sounds like you forced it
Hook is catchy , nice shit BLack

aww naww

is u a chick or r u jus 12...u need a LOT more bass in ya voice..most of ya meta's n punches is weak/played ya flow is mega old school the beat was weak..


idk this was awfull IMO but keep gettin at em dog,theirs only room for improvement

LMFAO...Youre fuckin pathetic kid :laugh2:

^...yea listen to his audio...lol...i see no reason why he would say anything of that nature

LOL Weerd...Yo LFS, The remix is already done, but get at me for another song...

listenign as i type

beat on that rock vibe its defienently dope tho...its heavy n thumping hmmmmm send this beat 2 me black magic...AIM = Acuity2k5

hahah at sfae sex punchline...ur quality is nice for the mostpart but u fade in n oout in places at the end of linez....u cud turn ur vocals up a lil bit...lyrically its pretty nice some funny ass punchlines....hook is nice and it blends well with the beat...that damage kids bar is dope and then followed up wid the aethist n christ line DOPE...hahahaha u got some creativity sun....the cut out is nice idea but the beat comes in on the wrong syllable of ur vocals...this was anice drop fam :thumbup:

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191300

Thanx homie...I will RTF...Uppin!

To the roof bitches!!!!!!!

You need work on your quality, but other than that, it was pretty good man. The beat is fucking hot

Weerd...Thanx man...Uppin!