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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"

He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"

You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs

Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute

Leikon Yo Verse Wuz Alot Of Uncreative Punchez In Dere, Dat Opener Dint Hit At All, Da Closer Wuz Da Best U Had 2 Offer, Dat Wuz Sum Funny Shit, U Need 2 Work On Yo Personalz An Being Mo Creative An Orifinal Wit Da Wordplay, Try Staying Off Da Fillerz 2

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"

Good Verse MaRVJay1009, Da Punchez Wuz On Fiyah, Dey Wuz Consistantly Dropping, Da Wordplay An Da Choice Ov Da Wrding Fo Da Punchez Wuz Mo Creative An Harder Hitting Den Lexikon, An Everythan Wuz Original, Only Thang I Wuz Feeling Wuz Dat Diddy Line, Dat Iz Played, But Da Rest Of Yo Verse Wuz Fiyah

Vote/ MaRVJay1009

Plz Return Da Vote In Da Battlez In Mah Signature

Voted For: LexiKon


Wow This Was a Really Dope Battle No Lie
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Very Hard decision but Heres my Breakdown

Lexikon
Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
first of all Thats really Original never seen the technique used any where else and your wording was on target anhd the punch was good

He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
:roll: OMFG That was Hot mayne Nice one there

You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
Nice...Didnt Get it at first LOL But Nice
Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
Nice little use of multi's and a def good Punch So Your whole verse basically was Very good :thumbup: nice Job

aii

Marv

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
Aii The 1st line wasnt worded all dat good it seemed kinda forced But the second line :thumbup: nice personal

punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
That was Good Not the best but Good
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
:nono: Both Lines were sort of off but the punch ddnt connect how it shouldve in the second line bcuz your worded it wrong so that bar wasnt all dat
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"
That was aii Man But Yet Your overall verse couldnt take my vote compared to Lex's verse ...sorry

Sorry To say this but lex gets my vote bcuz he came and hit harder with those punchez as you can see I explained my reasons already above so have a nice day

ps

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Ohh I Can seee That This Is a very close Battle LOL

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
—4, played punch, been used b4
He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
—6, decent punch
You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
—4, didn’t like this line
Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
—7, pretty decent bar


Lex – 21/40, overall here u had an aight drop
only 2 bars were wack, cuz one of them was played
and the other was just weak.. could’ve added more
personas in there, & don’t center ur verse, just makes
it wack on that’s not how ur structure looks like, but
ur other 2 bars were good, though, & u had an aight
drop


da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
—7, pretty nice persona
punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
—4, lunch-box lines = played
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
—6, decent persona
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a “roll of quarter's”
—5, average punch

Marv – 22/40, overall u had a good drop also,
Couple of punches need help on those but
Personally u had some decent personas, but
Also u had a good use of them in this advantage
In this battle, that lunch-box line was played
Cuz other members of RV & myself have alrdy
Used that shit, but that’s makes ur shit played too
Ur structure was okay, & the punches were decent
But overall u took this one by a little bit though..

..no hate

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Voted For: LexiKon

I'ma give this one to Lex. I think he was more consistent wit tha punches and he started off hot from tha first line to tha last. Marv had to catch it and shit. Because tha first couple of lines werent that hard hitting. Marv, yo verse was ight. I wasnt feelin alot of tha punches. I just feel they didnt connect like they shouldve. I didnt see too much wordplay in yo verse, but I seen alot of mettas. Which was coo. But overall, yo flow started lackin near tha end, and I dont feel yo verse was strong at all. Lex- I think yo verse was strong, and you came wit alot of consistency. I think yo punches were alot more hard hitting in this one. I felt you came out strong and stayed that way tha whole entire verse. You flow was on point, mainly because yo structure was flawless. Not a word that was in tha wrong place. Overall- I felt this was a good battle. Close, and I could see both guys are truly talented, but I think I'ma give this one up to Lex because his punches were stronger and they were more consistent.


Please RTF...link in sig. You have 1 day. If you don't, I'ma request that they remove my vote.

Lex....homie. I can't remember if you RTF'd. Since I can't remember, I'ma leave this one on, you lucky, but just make sure you always RTF. uppin this battle.

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*

Ok name play

punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".

Dope

lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..

Lol ok

only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"

Nice

VS

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"

Ok

He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"

No played+wack+immature

You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs

Ok

Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute

Ha nice

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