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M-Eazy 05-16-05 07:52 PM

This was feedback posted for Babble.On
 
fix ur structure. too much to be tryna read................

Babble.On 05-16-05 08:12 PM

^ Lol, everyone on this site uses short ass bars, it's hard to get used to.

_JooKsta_ 05-16-05 08:51 PM

Voted For: Babble.On

Babble On...u have a ok verse...u lost me in ya flow sumtime but i found myself again...u had sum ok punches,nuthin to brag about....structure is horrible which prolly messed up my reading.

Ax Dog-Ur verse was pretty basic and need lots of work...creare sum punches and come wit better personals...u got the potensial it just seem like u really dont try ta make people say "Damn!"...

punches-Babble On
Structure-Ax
vocab-Babble On
Flow-Ax
Opener-Babble On
Closer-Tie

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Babble.On 05-16-05 08:55 PM

Good Looks Folks


Uppin this for some more Votes

Babble.On 05-17-05 08:13 AM

Wow...... none of those should have been inadequate feedback....even the vote against me lol.


Oh well, uppin.

Babble.On 05-17-05 04:09 PM

Uppin

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Dervla 05-17-05 04:13 PM

This was feedback posted for Babble.On
 
Just checking...................................I'm lazy so i dont feel like voting.

B.I.G. 05-17-05 04:23 PM

wtf happened?................. why it all came back to 0, that's not fair

Babble.On 05-18-05 04:44 PM

^ The votes were DQ'd because apparently they weren't explained.

Damnit, uppin for more votes.

Kin*Ethicâ„¢ 05-18-05 05:33 PM

lmfao@my shizzle being disqualified........lame...

Babble.On 05-18-05 10:01 PM

Uppin this shit one more god-fucking damn time you cocksuckers

Babble.On 05-19-05 08:11 AM

Uppin again....vote on my god damn battle morons..

B Weezy 05-19-05 01:40 PM

Voted For: Babble.On

Babble.On - this was a close battle...but you had better punchlines and flow... your structue was good.. but keep working hard cuz you will be good. 8/10

Ax Dogg - again this WAS A CLOSE BATTLE.. but Babble.On had better punches and flow.. your flow was iight and your punches was iiight too.but keep working hard cuz you will be good. 7.5/10

V/ Babble.On

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

B.I.G. 05-19-05 02:02 PM

at least an honest vote........ lol
............................uppin................. ......

Babble.On 05-20-05 12:13 AM

Thanks for voting, uppin for some more votes......


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