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CeleriTy 05-17-05 03:32 PM

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~Luciano~ 05-17-05 07:46 PM

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~Luciano~ 05-18-05 08:29 PM

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Dirty Nigga 05-20-05 05:06 AM

Voted For: CeleriTy

nice battle y'all..........

wat da hell is the topic tho?

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MC Dark 05-20-05 06:00 AM

This was feedback posted for CeleriTy
 
Confused... is this a topical or poetry or somethin?

MC Dark 05-20-05 06:03 AM

Oh aight, i see the topic now. But people cant see that unless they vote or leave feedback. I'll vote now

MaRVJay 05-20-05 12:38 PM

This was feedback posted for CeleriTy
 
Wtf?????......whut Happen Ya'll Didnt Evem Tell Ppl Whut Da Topic Is Lmaoo......

Adam 05-21-05 12:45 PM

Voted For: CeleriTy

Celerity - Good drop man...Nice flow through-out the whole verse. Had some dope multies in there as well. The imagery was just wicked, some nice shit here for sure..I really enjoyed this verse...Some good vocabulary, none of that bullshit one word rhyming. Good emotion everything..Nice drop...8/10

(Jimmy Pocketz) - Aight, an allright drop here too. Your verse was kinda streched out though, the flow was a bit off, but other than that you had dope verse. A few forced rhymes, but you still came across with a good topical here...Was feeling the imagery an the emotion in it...I liked it...7/10

I think Celerity took this topical though, nice drop with good imagery, emotion and everything...

Vote: Celerity

~Luciano~ 05-22-05 09:14 PM

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CeleriTy 05-23-05 01:46 PM

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~Luciano~ 05-24-05 01:15 PM

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MyNamesGrafhYall 05-29-05 10:46 AM

Voted For: CeleriTy

Wat Iz Da Topic? I Suppose It Izza Topical Rite?

Well Celetiry Had Mo Creative Linez, Both Wuz Emotional, Da Scheme Ov Celerities Peice Certianly oVERLOOKED, Jimmy U Had Sum Iight Vocab 2, Juz Dat Celerityz Creativity An Scheme Ov Da Topic An Da Way He Expressed Da Emotions Took Da Battle By Storm

Vote/ Celerity

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature


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