This was feedback posted for smokey817
 

Vote-Tim Dim
Smoke! Man Seperate Yo LINEZ so We Can -Atleast- Know What Ya tryin To Say or Rhyme!N Maybe we Can Judge Ur verse!Read the Verse N Didnt Even Make Since Ta Me!
Tim Dim----------------------
Only way you'll elivate your verse is if you scroll down
Shit, 14 posts don't even have a rep to hold down
lol 8/10
Hurting this noob is no fun, I dont wanna be the one
To leave you 0-1, eating weeds the only time you spit dope son
^Pretty Weak 6/10
Now I've made you pissed you've cracked a fat one
But your only shooting blanks like a cap gun
LoL 7.5/10
just thought id tell ya da scorez of ya linez but HOLLA!

MAN WTF i didnt Want That For Da FEEDBACK! That Was A FCKIN VOTE!! :cussing:
Man BUT MY VOTE STILL GOES TO TIM DIM!!!

Voted For: tim dim

Weak battle, but Tim Dim gets it for his structure, cuz smokey's sucked...Both need major elevation on punches...

uping this battle for votes.......................

^lol why would you veiw polls on such a shit battle?

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upitying this thread to get this shit over with...

Voted For: tim dim

Only way you'll elivate your verse is if you scroll down
Shit, 14 posts don't even have a rep to hold down

WHORED HIS WHOLE VERSE.

Hurting this noob is no fun, I dont wanna be the one
To leave you 0-1, eating weeds the only time you spit dope son

PLAYED BUT WAS ATLEAST A PUNCH

Now I've made you pissed you've cracked a fat one
But your only shooting blanks like a cap gun

NOPE....

smokey yours was a story of random words, no punches or flow and hard as fuck to read.

you seriousely need to either read a tut. on structure and punches, or quit.....

tim gets it for using a punch or two and being readable....

no hate, rtf so i dont need to dq my vote.

Voted For: tim dim

Tim Dim Wuz Short n Sweet, Da Verse Had Much Better Lyrikal Content An Da Shit Actually Looked Lyke A Verse An Not A Paragraph, Work On Yo Structure Smokey

Vote/ EZ Win Fo Tim Dim, Dont Even Need 2 Explain Why

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature