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Kawn Flixx 05-18-05 09:23 PM

Ahh this was iight , nothing really special , could have been alot better..
Structure was alittle shacky , lines were all over the place..
you had decent wordplay/ vocab ...could have better..
decent concept..nice flow... you had decent imagery..
Okay feeling..Overall it could have been better..
but it was good

The Militant 05-19-05 12:48 AM

thanks for the feed yalll uppin.................


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