lol.........how you go get me?

I dont know shit....................Your aint that sexy for me to come get. lol.

lol what you mean by that?

........................................nnnnnnnnno thing...

Aight Check It...

Your Flow Through The Piece Is Off Due To Extensive Lines and Your Lack of Ability To Sumarize Your Thoughts. Your Emotion and Imagery Is There...They're Nice...but Without Good Vocabulary and Nice Sentence Structure..You'll Always Be An Average Topical Head.

I Did Enjoy Reading This, and The End Was Mos Def A Good Way To End This Piece of Literature. Good Creativity.

Keep It Up Man.

~R~

^^ Thanx for the feed................Uppin.........

Nice piece, like the others said, great rhyme, imagery, and emotion, really felt it. Good drop man, keep it up.

nice drop man...good emotion and nice word play...the end of this was crazy man...shit really took a twist but very good drop...pce 1