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Voted For: Yung Bricc
Yo Bricc Got Diz EZ... Herrez Why= Much Better Punchlinez, Mo Creative Wid It, Wordplay Cant Be Faulted Frum Bricc, Overall It Wuz A Real Decent Drop, Good Verse Onna Real Nice Personal Leven, Good Job. REDZONE, U Had Sum Iight Rhymez 2 Playa, Not Enuff Consistancy & Creativity In Yo Punz & Wordplay, Bricc Had Mo 2 Offer Onna Personal Level 2 Bricc Got Diz EZ........ http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191943 Vote on Dat Link Bric Or My Vote Will Be Removed, Pz Out All [no hate] http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191943 |
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Voted For: Yung Bricc
Redzone: Yung Bricc? I'll leave you done quick, try some dumb shit// tha hand I hold tha gun wit, jus fa fun bitch I'll get cha lung hit// Not A Punch..Wack.3/10 really you Yung Shit, cuz this ain't fa Boyz II Men guys// you homo, usually found stuck suckin between men's thighs// Weak..2/10 ?Question? Is RedZone in ya house? ...Without a doubt// got ill flow ta keep ya closed mouf thas what imma bout// Wack..2/10 ya interest is rappin, mah intentions will change ya profession// you easily threatned while second guessin that cha rhymes got perfection// Blah..3/10 facts of life get cha poofed, popped from tha skill of mah Aim// cauz tha only thang poppin on tha west coast is Snoop, Pac, and The Game// Wack..2/10 Overall: 12/50...Learn How To Write A Punch and Metaphor. Yung Bricc: -This Nigga Wanna Battle Me? Well Homie You Real Bold- -The Only Time You In Tha Hood Iz When It Getz Too Cold-* Ok..5/10 -Stop Ya Bitch Shit,Nigga You Pussy Az Fuck- -Bars Go Through Ya Guts And Exit Through Ya Nuts- Not Feeling This..2/10 -This Battle Iz Done Homie,No Need For Me To Floss- -And I Saty Shittin On Da Red Zone Like Randy Moss-* Nice Second Line..5/10 -You From The South Rite? Well Why You Aint Hot- -I'll Lay You Down And Stomp You Out Like You Apart Of Tha Block-* Blah..3/10 -The Streetz Of Compton Iz Talkin and I Rip Shit Apart- -These Puchlines Flood Ya Bitch Ass Like Noah's Ark- Ok..4/10 -Fuck Ya Life,I Would Say Fuck Ya Wife But She A Man- -Got A Cock In Ya Mouth 'Bout To Operate Wit Ya Hand- Wack..2/10 -Shit iz Done,Dead,Killed Quick Nigga,Im Thru- -I Think You Color Blind Cuz Red Dont Equal To Blue- Weak..3/10 Overall: 24/70 ~R~ |
Voted For: REDZONE
Flow - Redzone...he had da multies dat jus made the flow go better...the flow was almost the same but redzone had some transition flow better Punches - Redzone..that Westcoast line waz ill..nice personal and nice punch...over better punches..Yung Brick Stay Focused with your punches Personals -Redzone...the west coast personal was better den his personal Multies -...Redzone...Bricc had none Vocab -ELEVATE FOR BOTH...NONE IN EITHER Originality -Both had played concepts..tie for both...that redzone line by bricc was nice though... V/Redzone...both had a cool verse but both need to elevate... Church |
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