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MyNamesGrafhYall 05-31-05 09:14 AM

Voted For: Yung Bricc

Yo Bricc Got Diz EZ...
Herrez Why=

Much Better Punchlinez, Mo Creative Wid It, Wordplay Cant Be Faulted Frum Bricc, Overall It Wuz A Real Decent Drop, Good Verse Onna Real Nice Personal Leven, Good Job.

REDZONE, U Had Sum Iight Rhymez 2 Playa, Not Enuff Consistancy & Creativity In Yo Punz & Wordplay, Bricc Had Mo 2 Offer Onna Personal Level 2

Bricc Got Diz EZ........

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Young Drama 06-03-05 12:32 AM

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Restricted 06-13-05 11:58 PM

Voted For: Yung Bricc



Redzone:

Yung Bricc? I'll leave you done quick, try some dumb shit//
tha hand I hold tha gun wit, jus fa fun bitch I'll get cha lung hit//
Not A Punch..Wack.3/10
really you Yung Shit, cuz this ain't fa Boyz II Men guys//
you homo, usually found stuck suckin between men's thighs//
Weak..2/10
?Question? Is RedZone in ya house? ...Without a doubt//
got ill flow ta keep ya closed mouf thas what imma bout//
Wack..2/10
ya interest is rappin, mah intentions will change ya profession//
you easily threatned while second guessin that cha rhymes got perfection//
Blah..3/10
facts of life get cha poofed, popped from tha skill of mah Aim//
cauz tha only thang poppin on tha west coast is Snoop, Pac, and The Game//
Wack..2/10

Overall: 12/50...Learn How To Write A Punch and Metaphor.

Yung Bricc:

-This Nigga Wanna Battle Me? Well Homie You Real Bold-
-The Only Time You In Tha Hood Iz When It Getz Too Cold-*
Ok..5/10
-Stop Ya Bitch Shit,Nigga You Pussy Az Fuck-
-Bars Go Through Ya Guts And Exit Through Ya Nuts-
Not Feeling This..2/10
-This Battle Iz Done Homie,No Need For Me To Floss-
-And I Saty Shittin On Da Red Zone Like Randy Moss-*
Nice Second Line..5/10
-You From The South Rite? Well Why You Aint Hot-
-I'll Lay You Down And Stomp You Out Like You Apart Of Tha Block-*
Blah..3/10
-The Streetz Of Compton Iz Talkin and I Rip Shit Apart-
-These Puchlines Flood Ya Bitch Ass Like Noah's Ark-
Ok..4/10
-Fuck Ya Life,I Would Say Fuck Ya Wife But She A Man-
-Got A Cock In Ya Mouth 'Bout To Operate Wit Ya Hand-
Wack..2/10
-Shit iz Done,Dead,Killed Quick Nigga,Im Thru-
-I Think You Color Blind Cuz Red Dont Equal To Blue-
Weak..3/10

Overall: 24/70

~R~

Denied Truth 06-14-05 12:23 AM

Voted For: REDZONE


Flow - Redzone...he had da multies dat jus made the flow go better...the flow was almost the same but redzone had some transition flow better
Punches - Redzone..that Westcoast line waz ill..nice personal and nice punch...over better punches..Yung Brick Stay Focused with your punches
Personals -Redzone...the west coast personal was better den his personal
Multies -...Redzone...Bricc had none
Vocab -ELEVATE FOR BOTH...NONE IN EITHER
Originality -Both had played concepts..tie for both...that redzone line by bricc was nice though...

V/Redzone...both had a cool verse but both need to elevate...
Church


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