Jeah @ Ex-Crew................Aha...............I Got In 2 Battles For No Reason! Kinda Upsettin..

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

both verses had good punches...but, daubs seemed to come harder. liked the structure too.

Its Funny.................This Kid Josh Neva Likes My Shit..............In Every Battle I Have............Weird!

^he voted against me before too....
but why didnt you vote, fucka feedback.

Voted For: Daubs

Ackrite-- came decent, punches were alright, flow was decent, wordplay was ight'....

Daubs-- tought ackrite prolly won till i see ya verse, started alright, ended good..punches hit harder, flow was alright....

Punches-- Daubs
Flow-- Tie
Wordplay-- Ackrite
Metaphors-- Daubs
Multis-- Niether
Structure-- Ackrite

Final vote--- Daubs..

R.t.f http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191164

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^Explain your vote alot more herb..................................

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Jeah Explain Dat Shit More Fool............I Wasnt Feelin Ya Breakdown At All...........& No I Aint Bitchin

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Voted For: Daubs

The pic in his sig, turns it from abstract to grunge..
Bitch claims he godly?
Well he couldnt be holy..........if he were a sponge!!
6...nice opener, pretty funny!!
People gona see this battle, say its wack, based on ackrite.
My rhymes are infinate..
You got about as much skill.........as pages in ya website!!
5...nah, not feelin this punch!!
Fuck tha TNT, we just need me, coz ma lyrics so explosive..
Boom it......
And what kinda bitch reps his own lyrics in his own sig....
4...nah!! self-g in the first line!!
This bondage bitch is the type to have sex where he gotta force em..
Fuckin peedo...
Fuck ya skill coz even your earings to ya face are outta proportion!
5...weak, cud be done better!!
My lyrics so perfect and consistant, yet still dont grow old...
TKO??
After this battle you can officially be know as "The K O 'd!!"!
5...nice 2nd line, but 1st line was self-glorifyin!!

OVERALL: 25/50


Daubs Life Consists Of 'Foreign Principals'........Understand Discipline!
Drugs? Thought 'SNIFFIN DIABETICS' Would Get Him High Off Insulin!
4...weak, drug lines are one of the great played concepts!!
Lets Talk About Ya Lil Incident..........Fuckin Asshole Cant Shit Anymore!
Cuz He Let His Last 'HOLE-MEAT'............A Dickhead Dats A 'Carnivore'!
3...1st line fake personal!! 2nd line played!!
Damn Its Funni Daubs Begged Me 2 Spit, Knowin A Loss Is In Store...
LL Has No Faith In You, Dey 'SELLIN YA SPOT' Like A 'Housin-Hor'!....
6...nice, a funny ass line!!
Tell Me Somethin Good About You......I'm Waitin......Y Da Long Pause?
Ya Man Told Me You SUCK-SHARKS........No Wonder Dey Made Jaws!
6...clever 2nd line, nice shit!!
12 Lines? 10 Is Enough You Merked, Feelins Wet? I Know Ur Sogged
Since I'm Killin A Bitch I'm Goin 2 Jail....................For Cruetly To DOGS!
5...not feelin this closer!!

OVERALL: 24/50


at first glance i thought ackrite took this, but going through it Daubs takes it. he had a nice opener but then fell off with some weak lines and some played concepts. but ackrite started off with a played concept then had a fake personal which aint gonna win ya shit, had a couple of funny lines but they weren't enough.

V/ - Daubs

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191568
RTF!!! that bizattle!! don't and i will remove my vote!!

Voted For: Daubs

lol bit of a one sided battle here if u ask me....

ackrite:

Daubs Life Consists Of 'Foreign Principals'........Understand Discipline!
Drugs? Thought 'SNIFFIN DIABETICS' Would Get Him High Off Insulin!
good opener decent punch 7/10
Lets Talk About Ya Lil Incident..........Fuckin Asshole Cant Shit Anymore!
Cuz He Let His Last 'HOLE-MEAT'............A Dickhead Dats A 'Carnivore'!
fake personal? not a hard hitting punch 5/10
Damn Its Funni Daubs Begged Me 2 Spit, Knowin A Loss Is In Store...
LL Has No Faith In You, Dey 'SELLIN YA SPOT' Like A 'Housin-Hor'!....
good wordplay not effective punch 6/10
Tell Me Somethin Good About You......I'm Waitin......Y Da Long Pause?
Ya Man Told Me You SUCK-SHARKS........No Wonder Dey Made Jaws!
decent punch here 7/10
12 Lines? 10 Is Enough You Merked, Feelins Wet? I Know Ur Sogged
Since I'm Killin A Bitch I'm Goin 2 Jail....................For Cruetly To DOGS!
^^ weak closure man wtf is tht lol 4/10

29/ 50... im shcoked ackrite u usually drop doper than this man... u need to stay consistant in your battles thats how u get the win u didn't come hard in this battle and you should ab... structure is good though just work on your punches...

daubs..

The pic in his sig, turns it from abstract to grunge..
Bitch claims he godly?
Well he couldnt be holy..........if he were a sponge!!
decent opener 7/10
People gona see this battle, say its wack, based on ackrite.
My rhymes are infinate..
You got about as much skill.........as pages in ya website!!
good man this was actually dope lol 8/10
Fuck tha TNT, we just need me, coz ma lyrics so explosive..
Boom it......
And what kinda bitch reps his own lyrics in his own sig....
ight punch kinda weak compared to the others 6/10
This bondage bitch is the type to have sex where he gotta force em..
Fuckin peedo...
Fuck ya skill coz even your earings to ya face are outta proportion!
haha good personal 7/10
My lyrics so perfect and consistant, yet still dont grow old...
TKO??
After this battle you can officially be know as "The K O 'd!!"!
alryt closure not bad punch 6/10

34/ 50 daubs u did good in this battle u stayed consistant all the way through and kept the punches flying in lol... try to find some better concepts for your punches coz they are kinda played

good battle daubs gets this for having better punches all the way through and staying consistant... good battle though pzzzz


rtf... links in the sig pzz n no hate

Dis Is Bullshit.......I'm In Dis "Crew" Battle Down 2 For A Crew Dats Not Even Togetha Ne More! Shit......

& Dat "ActRite.Com" Shit Is A Fake Personal....There Is No ActRite.Com Wtf....UPPIN'

yes there fuckin is...type it and see...or click the link!!!

to the roof bitches...............................