i will hit up one of your battles with a vote soon. thanks for the votes ya'll..

This was feedback posted for Carlton Banks
 

fucker this yo like eggs nah mean ????????

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

checkinnnnnnnn polls n uppin 4 mah nigga CA$

HOLLA

Voted For: Carlton Banks

i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.
was feelin the wordplay a lot and good opener
mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is.
because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is.
lmao...good punch
Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all..
you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!*
eh...ok
stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses.
But..
it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses!
...
you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me.
& come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory.
good closer...liked this more then last 2 bars...

this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart....
cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start.....
Didnt feel like a punch, not a good opener
yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones...
but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone...
eh...i liked the connection between the punch and the setup but punch felt weak
gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that....
that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black
nah...
man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit.....
cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit..
nope...isnt a punch it just feels like your just talking...
homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin..
if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin
again its just eh...
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...
ok...best bar in the verse but still weak

Overall no hate to both but I pick carlton for harder punches basically and some wordplay...i liked his opener and closers, casper i wasnt really feelin your verse no hate...just the punches were weak and werent up to par with carltons...
Best bar from each verse IMO:

Carlton...
i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.

Casper
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...

Good luck to both
peace

Voted For: Carlton Banks

While.........i didnt think Rich boy from Fresh Prince of Belair could rip like that..........Nuff said Banks took this wit ease...he head better punches and vocabulary while Caspers was medicore......Ups to both rappers but i have to say dis belongs to Banks

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

checking in here to how how the votes are going.xxxxxxxxxx

i'd like to raise this battle up a notch, so it will get noticed and people will be obliged to vote and hand me my first win and whatnot. # 4.

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

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Voted For: Carlton Banks

weell wasnt this a one sided battle lol....

ne wayz imma break it down...

ca$per...

u go thinkin u are dope but u aint as good as u think u need to stop tht coz its getting out of hand lol... u had some good lines in there but none of them really stood out.. overall it was a bad verse, u jus lacked the hard punches, structure and flow was real gd u got that on lock u just need to practise punches....
overall 65/100

carlton banks...

now this verse was good man... u had some funny lines in there they were all dope but that elevated line i played, you need to work on your strucute but other than that your verse was dope man keep it up...

overall 87/100

good job keep it up and keep elevatin both of you... you can only get better pz...