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damn...i thought i was on the roster
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you are. on the roster in the other thread deadlyvision made.
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ENGLISH DUMB MOTHER FUCKER!!!!!!!!! i belive he meant "Fuck this crew" Marv learn to type kid damn i thought i told your dumb ass once. |
you spelt believe wrong, :cool:.
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191622
check out my open mic and let me know whats good |
Got any topical wins?
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nope sorry..........
but i do open mic's......... did u peep my open mic?? plez leave feed back... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191622 its a collabo with atticus its called: cowards |
oo yea i got a few more collabos with others like onestepbeyound i think it was and someone else in poetry as-well go check'em out...
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Drop a 20 line topical in 30 mins on "Life on the Edge"
Starting NOW |
24 MINUTES LEFT CON..LOL....
hey motif this kids got a good attitude prolly be good if sum1 worked with him...pz |
7 minutes later...
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oo-shit my bad u want me to what??
IP: B682 856F Drop a 20 line topical in 30 mins on "Life on the Edge" i will do it i will start now it count down is on... |
life on the edge freestyle:
my lifes on the edge.... Leave the broken pieces there, as if they could put themselves back together on their own Leave no trace of your existence, only a shadow of a fingerprint... my lifes on the edge.... Glass everywhere, shards of memories and useless words Beat down while trying to stand tall, over and over again until all that is left are the broken pieces... my lifes on the edge... Leave the broken pieces there...Just leave them All the broken pieces covering the ground, each telling a story, a portrayal of the past... my lifes ont he edge... Mirroring a reflection of an imprint that once held a feeling on both sides of the image With hazed eyes, all that is seen is a one-sided story of broken promises and lost hope.... my lifes on the edge.... As you walk out the door, just like the rest, stepping over the already broken pieces so they can't be whole again Leave the broken pieces there...Just leave them cuz.... my lifes on the edge.... it feels like im holding on to dear life with no hands or rope just endless down-hill fights and good people dieing like the pope.. my lifes on the edge... babymoms with child-support, family acting like stranger friends want money, hoes want jewlery, life is a endless anger... my life on the edge... if it wasnt why do i speak of it, i rather get rid of it, but lifes on the edge is all i know cuz everyday u maybe next to go so while im on the edge might-as-well face it and just let it go... cuz my life just went ova the EDGE NIGGA WHAT!!!!..... sorry this is all i can come up with now... freestyle what ya think?? |
i could of did better if i had more time...
i aint know how to go about this one... should i've kept going with each bar my lifes on the edge or should i have just went like a regular verse or what?? so this is all i had hope its good enough... |
Marv did u really think u gonna get in wit us?...lol
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