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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

aight overall Marv took this

i think marv may have me b-listed though so i am going to post this first to see if i can vote

We All Know You Live Online, Ya Records Fourty..............And Senile
Told Jay Go 'GET A LIFE'......He Reincarnated Into A Pack Of 'Styles'!
6...aight this was pretty funny!!!
On My Dick? He Must Be NUTS......Fuckin Herb, I'll Kill You Wit Blunts
Fagget Smut, Only Way He'd Give Up Sex Is If There Were No BUTTS!
3...gay lines are played like fuck!!
Salived Guts....Marv Has No 'JAYS'.....All His Shots Wine & DO-FUS!
I Got Sluts!, Tell Everybody How All Ya Squirrel's Men Who Got Nuts!
6...nice wordplay, dope punch!!
You Nasty Fool...Last Time Jay Tasted Saliva It Was His Own Drool!
Heard He's A HOT-Head, My 'Flows-A.C.'......Menstruatin Til Ya Cool!
6...LoL!!! 2nd line was nice!!
Finishin Marv's Easy, He Not Da Hardest Ive Tested...Lil Suggestion
Next Time You PM Me To Battle....
.....................Make Sure Ya 'SHITS-TIGHT' Like Hemroid-Congestion!
8...LMAO!!! this was a cracker!!!

OVERALL: 29/50


me lose 2 ackrite?,lol im 'real' like "nas in belly" i dont 'act right'.
but how's dis cat nice...he dont key bar's dis nigga "ack (w)rites".
6...good opener, nice multies!!
da iLLUNaTiKZ is da wackest of crew's,ur a fake nothin u rappin is true.
like ya rec. u gon lose 5-0 ya a.K.a 'TKO' well datz about 2 happen 2 u.*
7...multies nice again, gud personal!!
im no joke make ya dome smoke afta clipz hit up ya wig,dis nigga is a kid.
& a homo who you gets dressed up 2 put pictures in his sig.**
5...not feelin it....a bit of a gay line in there!!!
fella wait..noobie's be tellin u da elevate,u were neva great.
ima be da "NEX" 2 "TEL(L)" u tell ur wack so dont "CELL-abrate".
7...wordplay = dOPE!!!
get it! u'll be puttin "ice on ya lip" since u think its "COOL da smerk".
yea u got tools da squirt,but ya gun like ppl "on welfare" it "refuse 2 work".
8...LMAO!!! you got a killer line to as ya closer!!

OVERALL: 33/50

......a close battle
ackrite had a real gay line, but the rest was pretty dope and very consistent
marv came with the usual dope shit, had sum funny ass lines and i was definitely feelin the closer.....that shit made me laugh hard........overall i think marv came that extra bit harder and his one weak line was not as weak as Ackrite's line!!!

RTF on this battle!!!!
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Aii Total Breakdown Bar By Bar

Marv
me lose 2 ackrite?,lol im 'real' like "nas in belly" i dont 'act right'.
but how's dis cat nice...he dont key bar's dis nigga "ack (w)rites".
Now thats the worste ive ever seen you do LOL
da iLLUNaTiKZ is da wackest of crew's,ur a fake nothin u rappin is true.
like ya rec. u gon lose 5-0 ya a.K.a 'TKO' well datz about 2 happen 2 u.*
Nice WordPlay
im no joke make ya dome smoke afta clipz hit up ya wig,dis nigga is a kid.
& a homo who you gets dressed up 2 put pictures in his sig.**
:roll: Wow Nuttin More to say
fella wait..noobie's be tellin u da elevate,u were neva great.
ima be da "NEX" 2 "TEL(L)" u tell ur wack so dont "CELL-abrate".
Original Shit Man I Like it :thumbup:
get it! u'll be puttin "ice on ya lip" since u think its "COOL da smerk".
yea u got tools da squirt,but ya gun like ppl "on welfare" it "refuse 2 work".
:shocked: OMG that was Nice Im Speechless Man Nice bar


Ackrite
We All Know You Live Online, Ya Records Fourty..............And Senile
Told Jay Go 'GET A LIFE'......He Reincarnated Into A Pack Of 'Styles'!
Nuttin Specail Couldve Been worded betta
On My Dick? He Must Be NUTS......Fuckin Herb, I'll Kill You Wit Blunts
Fagget Smut, Only Way He'd Give Up Sex Is If There Were No BUTTS!
That Was Cool I Like that
Salived Guts....Marv Has No 'JAYS'.....All His Shots Wine & DO-FUS!
I Got Sluts!, Tell Everybody How All Ya Squirrel's Men Who Got Nuts!
Too Many Words man But the Punch was aii
You Nasty Fool...Last Time Jay Tasted Saliva It Was His Own Drool!
Heard He's A HOT-Head, My 'Flows-A.C.'......Menstruatin Til Ya Cool!
Umm Not all Dat But It wasnt wack
Finishin Marv's Easy, He Not Da Hardest Ive Tested...Lil Suggestion
Next Time You PM Me To Battle....
.....................Make Sure Ya 'SHITS-TIGHT' Like Hemroid-Congestion
THE HOTTEST BAR OUT OF THIS WHOLE BATTLE

Overall

Aii Overall Even Though Ackrite supplied the Best punch of this battle Ill have to say that marv supplied More Punchez that hit bar after bar ...but ackrite you waited till the end to try and Hit your hardest you shouldbe doin that like every other bar But It was a nice battle Def one of the best Ive read ina while so Thanx for this battle but id have to give my vote to

v/ Marvjay

RTF In any Battle in My Sig Please

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Marv
Aiight Man Pretty Nice Shit Came All Creative In This Verse, You Came Good With Structure As Well This Battles Was Pointless You Killed It Man, Punch Lines We're Hitting Him Hard, You Even Had Good Word Play Shit Was Hott Fam, Your Personals Was There, All Hitting Hard, Very Nice Verse Man Creative Punch Lines mostly All Original Shit I See From You

Ack
Aiight You Came Cool And Originals Structure Was Fucked Don't Seperate The Bars We Know Where Each Bar Ends, Man, Also You Had Some Okay Personals Creative Shit, Punch Lines Was Cool, Again Creative But Not Hitting Your Opponent Hard Enough To Win, Your Vocabulary Was Kind Of Basic Man, Nothing Stood Out As Much As Marv's Verse Did

Vote-Marvjay
Return The Favor Me Vs Murdz In My Sig

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

me lose 2 ackrite?,lol im 'real' like "nas in belly" i dont 'act right'.
but how's dis cat nice...he dont key bar's dis nigga "ack (w)rites".
da iLLUNaTiKZ is da wackest of crew's,ur a fake nothin u rappin is true.
like ya rec. u gon lose 5-0 ya a.K.a 'TKO' well datz about 2 happen 2 u.*
im no joke make ya dome smoke afta clipz hit up ya wig,dis nigga is a kid.
& a homo who you gets dressed up 2 put pictures in his sig.**
fella wait..noobie's be tellin u da elevate,u were neva great.
ima be da "NEX" 2 "TEL(L)" u tell ur wack so dont "CELL-abrate".
get it! u'll be puttin "ice on ya lip" since u think its "COOL da smerk".
yea u got tools da squirt,but ya gun like ppl "on welfare" it "refuse 2 work".

Yo Real Nice Rhymez Dawg, U Doin It Da Quenz Way Goin Real Lyrikal On Diz Kat, Good Shit, Punchez Wuz Fiyah, Wordplay Culdnt Ov Been Better, Dat ''TKO'' Shit Wuz Nice 2, Good Personal & Playin Off Hiz Name, Overall U Bought It Raw Man, Real Raw, Good Job


We All Know You Live Online, Ya Records Fourty..............And Senile
Told Jay Go 'GET A LIFE'......He Reincarnated Into A Pack Of 'Styles'!

On My Dick? He Must Be NUTS......Fuckin Herb, I'll Kill You Wit Blunts
Fagget Smut, Only Way He'd Give Up Sex Is If There Were No BUTTS!

Salived Guts....Marv Has No 'JAYS'.....All His Shots Wine & DO-FUS!
I Got Sluts!, Tell Everybody How All Ya Squirrel's Men Who Got Nuts!

You Nasty Fool...Last Time Jay Tasted Saliva It Was His Own Drool!
Heard He's A HOT-Head, My 'Flows-A.C.'......Menstruatin Til Ya Cool!

Finishin Marv's Easy, He Not Da Hardest Ive Tested...Lil Suggestion
Next Time You PM Me To Battle....
.....................Make Sure Ya 'SHITS-TIGHT' Like Hemroid-Congestion!

Good Verse Playboi, Nice Rhyme Scheme, Good Wordplay 2, Nuthin On Da Personal Side, So Dat Took Sum Sting Out'cha Punz, But And Overall Decent Verse, Both Came Pretty Sick Wd It, But Marv Killed Da Flow Wit Dem Punz & Creative Wordplay


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