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Valor 05-25-05 02:15 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

damn good ass battle.....very close

cali..
nice punches,good word play man,your personals were severe and hit him hard,the flow was kickin through out,the structure was also in a clean format,the ender is what i think killed this fool Went from groupie to foe this kids 'Sharon Stone' he got a 'Fatal Attraction'
But if (your up/Europe) in this battle we talking locations of rapping


ICE-D
you also had a nice verse your structure was nice,your flow was also doin it nice,your punches were hitting hard also,the personals were decent....i felt that way becus the cali having DR lines are so played out these days there older that george washington sorry....but the rest were very nice like the one with his crew
Ya see posts about ‘dope heads’ and crews referred to as the elite…
Let’s be real though, put ‘2 and 2’ together ‘n’ it don’t add up to ‘6’ Feet…


V/C.A.L.I

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Adam 05-25-05 07:56 AM

If The Council members are not allowed to vote, then either is Valor, he was in your crew last week..

King Solo 05-25-05 11:42 AM

^^ werd!!!

if that Valor vote stands then Council members are allowed to vote to.............

50Cal. 05-25-05 02:12 PM

no thier not and valor hasnt been in my crew for like 2 weeks and he wasnt even in he checked in then left and never posted again so no

King Solo 05-25-05 02:18 PM

well that VALOR vote is being removed then bitch.....

Sean Gunner 05-25-05 03:11 PM

This was feedback posted for Ice-D
 
Aight, this battle was a decent one. Cali ya verse had too many links, it's a pain to have to go and see the punch. Why don't ya just explain at the end of the verse? Same thing basically. Punches weren't that hard, only decent personal was the be like me personal.

D iced, good verse in my opinion. Witty in some spot, but some played lines. The DR is kind of played, but you put a decent twist on it. Spelling out Cali isn't that original, but it was ok. Overall pretty good.

Triple_N 05-25-05 03:20 PM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

67-20 total rec!! Groupies inflate ya ego, CALI thinks that he’s blowin up…
But it ain’t shit to the ‘183’ battles when nobody wud bother with showin up…

I see what u was trying to do but it ain't work son, u jus made a plain statement..it wasn't a punch or a personal...try throwing some wordplay or a flip in there...yes I saw the "183"<--not wordplay..jus a statement

Just started, already I got this ‘dick exposed’ like ‘puberty fuzz trims’…
Caliph’s claim to fame is bein a white boy leadin an order of muslims…*

Dawg puberty/ dick line?...u don't get much more played than that..an that was the setup...then ya punch was once again..jus a statement...u jus made the definition of his name rhyme didn't diss him....again..try adidng sum wordplay or a flip of some sort.

Ya see posts about ‘dope heads’ and crews referred to as the elite…
Let’s be real though, put ‘2 and 2’ together ‘n’ it don’t add up to ‘6’ Feet…

setup was relevant..it matched the punch...the punch was jus weak...but its the first real jab u threw so far..so good on that.

Even with a ‘tsunami of thoughts’ CALI still wouldn’t get a ‘brain wave’…
I mean “Burying Wack Crews”..why not just admit ya ‘diggin ya own grave’…

Setup was creative but worded wack an somewhat forced....punch was an attempted personal but it was weak...however this is your first real flip of the battle so points for that.

Proof your a paedophile..this 24 yr old got clans of RV kids on his dick…
Rep the weak 6 Feet, bitch pressin my mouse I be hittin a harder clique…

Setup was some what played but had a strong basis...then it crashed & burned fatally on the punchline...u don't get anymore basic then that punch...nice try for wordplay but no, son.

Head up ya 6 Feet ‘Roosta’..maybe that’s why ya ‘chicken’ outta fights…
Only reason you top that list is cuz ya ass takes wackness to new heights…

Again a creative setup...an horrible punch...that punch needs no explaining...it was jus plain ass.

Dude what’s with ya 6 Feet roster, sum kind of herb-infested communion…
Last time I saw that much shit was when I crashed ya last family reunion…

ROLMFAO...now thats a personal....FINALLY something worth reading...good shit...u shoulda hit like this thru whole battle...even snuck a few multies in there.

I got an idea for ya..rename ya crew C.A.L.I, now that wud be ironic…
Cuz ya just a C.ollection of A.ssclowns who’s skillz are L.ess than I.diotic…

I figured u'd finish strong after that reunion line but u crashed & burned again wit this....the "spelling out the name" shit is overdone an was always wack...u was jus reaching for a personal an failed horribly.


Wasnt no 'King' and couldnt be 'Solo' needed a crew to better this clown
Wanted to be me so bad he took my name and switched the letters around

Setup was blah...punch would be wack but its factual...I hadn't noticed he had 1 of ya names flipped round lol...so this is a good jab...not hard but a decent one.

Kids pussy when its 'K.onflictz' you usually loses just READ
Cuz we on the highway of elevation and solos riding a 10 speed

Ok setup seemed promising wit the link an all even tho liks have faded out but anyways, the punch was wea son....an elevation line is played as it is...so u gotta come original on it...an a bike meta = played & weak as hell.

Really your no threat this safe sex i got this 'dick' in the 'bag'
Nobody respects you,you not tough you got knocked out by a FAG!!

Setup was blah....punch was barely decent...cuz of the link but nothing special.

Of course you 'cold as ice' its been that long since you spit fire
And you said it yaself

Quote:
Originally Posted by ice-d
How many people gonna say im a c.al.i dickrider?

lol.....again a decent line but nothing spectacualar but ok

Went from groupie to foe this kids 'Sharon Stone' he got a 'Fatal Attraction'
But if (your up/Europe) in this battle we talking locations of rapping

Setup was creative but blah....but punch was good...nice use of his origin....good line not greatr but good


Overall this was a weak battle.....solo had one hard line...if u had another line like that son I would have gave it to you...cali beat u jus cuz he had a few decent lines....all u needed was on more monster an u had this fam...no hate jus realness.........1

50Cal. 05-25-05 03:30 PM

Why don't ya just explain at the end of the verse?
^^^AINT YOU THE SAME GUY WHO VOTED AGANIST ME AND SAID BECAUSE EXPLANATIONS ARE PLAYED:NONO:

Adam 05-25-05 05:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
no thier not and valor hasnt been in my crew for like 2 weeks and he wasnt even in he checked in then left and never posted again so no


Dude we haven't even talked with The Council in about a month now, and we are in the midst of setting up a battle with them...

That's the rule man, no old crew members are allowed to vote.. :thumbup:

King Solo 05-25-05 08:05 PM

uppin this bitch once again.......................

King Solo 05-26-05 12:34 PM

ya let ya self down in this battle CALI

came weaker than i thought you would

its clear i won, everyone has said
but you still keep getting my votes removed
LITTLE HERB!!!

Hattrick 05-26-05 03:32 PM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

nice battle, just checkin polllllssssssssssssssss

Removed

Hattrick 05-26-05 03:34 PM

OH FUCK... i think i just fucked this battle up! I DID NOT MEAN TO VOTE, I MENT TO PRESS FEEDBACK.... my bad guys, if this fucks the battle up i didnt mean too...


my bad forreal :banghead: i didnt mean to do this

50Cal. 05-26-05 03:39 PM

just pm strobe and tell him to remove it....................................


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