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how u gon change ya name in da middle of a battle fam???
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
jay gets the vote on this cuz the other verse was hard t follow. i didnt like the structure. this verse had some good punsches to it though. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Bonecollector
Dia Aiight Home Boy Firs Off Long Lines, Lol But Cool I Seen Alot Of Creative Punches On Here Which Was Good, Personals Ha Ha Nice Shit Man Wordplay Came Cool Creative Shit Man, You Had A Good Ammount Of Vocabulary In Your Verse Which Helped Out On Punches, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Decent Man, Creative Verse Good Shit Marvjay Aiight Hommie Nice Shit, You Had Some Punches In here Not Much Creative Though, Concepts Kind Of Taken But Cool Shit, Personals Was Aiight Man Wordplay Alot Of Connceting Shit Man,Structure Was Good Vocabulary Kind Of Basic Here but Okay Good Shit Good Battle My Vote Got To Go To Diagnosis For The Listed Reasons Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
upping for fam^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Yo Diz Battle Wuz One Of Da Best I Saw On Da Site So Far F'Real dis kid's fruity his own sister lends him a skirt,i remember dis jerk! he got banned from RaP KNOWLEDGE for bitin mimesis verse.* been on rv 2 years still no1 notice dis clown,when im holdin da pound. talk slick ima do like "dogs in back yard's" & put "BONE in da ground". ima make dis hoe hurt,punchlines aint u they just made ya flow worst. do any1 remember dis kid when he was iNDEPH,B.L.A or PROVERSE? no..ya like da "garbage train"..ya "tracks" are all "trash". when i break BONEs i dont mean da "weather" but u gon "four-cast". your gassed!...gettin fame battlin noobs whut da fuck u doin. like u got "cpu problems" cuzz with a 'gun' in ya fist u got "trouble-shootin". dude stop..u'll neva be b.i.g or even 2 pac..watch you flop. da only time u'll be "ON da radio" is "sittin on ya boom box". Hahaha, Da Punches Wuz Flawless Dawg, U Droppin Dem Thangz Lyke There Aint Nun 2 It, Really Feelin Dat ''Four-Cast'' Bar, An U Had Sum Dope Personalz 2, Yo Verse Culdnt Be Faulted By NaNobody Man! I'll Drop A Bomb.. We All Know 1009 Is A Long Way Gone.. Bone Will Murder This Guy-Dirty..... I'll BE Drunk On Baccardy.. But Sover Enough To Know That Jay/YAY Is Only Popular On Surpise-Partys!!.. I Got Knifes And Guns.. Marv Be Ready-To-Feel-Them.. You Locked In My Bars.. And You Aint Heading-Towards-Freedom.. You Dont Have To Be Smart To Know That *Nightmare is only dangerous* When Freedy-Is-In-Them!!.. (User Tittle) Dawg Foreal.. No-Hate.. Bones Will Crush Your Thoughs, Leaving You Completely Empty On Ya Souls-Fate.. I Aint A Math Teacher.. But I Know That On A Downscale *I AM After 10-09*.. Like 0-8!!.. (Think About It)* I'm Fast With Punches Like Tyson On A Corvette.. Massing With Bones?.. Holmes... That You'LL Regret.. You'll- Fall In This Thead.. That Hes *Initials Are M.J*.. Dont Mean This Guy Got Balls On The Net!!.. (OMG KO) Get off the fucking net you damn nerd...get your self a life..Cus the only ill you'd Get Is If You Caught H.I.V. ...................Wait i forget you cant get a girl , Cus the Only way Marv feel's complete is by coming to R.V** you can tell he bites,just Look How Fat His Stomach Looks,Cus after reading my verse Marvs gonna be well shook Im Throughin a fire punchlines that changes into a hook,So Watch Me Drop ''Marv'el,Like Fallin Comic Books... Yo In Da Opener U Said ''I Drop A Bomb'' Damn Rite U Do Dawg! Dat Verse Wuz Fiyah, U Came Real Wit Da Punchlinez, Flow Wuz Sick, Errythin Waz Nice Az Fuck Dawg, Only Thang Marv Beat U At Wuz Da Witty Wordplay An Use Ov Wordz, U Feel? Ya Both Certainly 2 Top MC'z An Diz Wuzza Real Nice Battle 2 Read Check It! Vote/MarvJay1009 4 Dem Hot Puncez & Da Wordplay Wuz Fucking Flawless, Sorry BoneCollector Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
I'll Drop A Bomb.. We All Know 1009 Is A Long Way Gone.. Bone Will Murder This Guy-Dirty..... I'll BE Drunk On Baccardy.. But Sover Enough To Know That Jay/YAY Is Only Popular On Surpise-Partys!!.. Lol seems too forced man I Got Knifes And Guns.. Marv Be Ready-To-Feel-Them.. You Locked In My Bars.. And You Aint Heading-Towards-Freedom.. You Dont Have To Be Smart To Know That *Nightmare is only dangerous* When Freedy-Is-In-Them!!.. (User Tittle) Nice Dawg Foreal.. No-Hate.. Bones Will Crush Your Thoughs, Leaving You Completely Empty On Ya Souls-Fate.. I Aint A Math Teacher.. But I Know That On A Downscale *I AM After 10-09*.. Like 0-8!!.. (Think About It)* Pretty dope I'm Fast With Punches Like Tyson On A Corvette.. Massing With Bones?.. Holmes... That You'LL Regret.. You'll- Fall In This Thead.. That Hes *Initials Are M.J*.. Dont Mean This Guy Got Balls On The Net!!.. (OMG KO) Good Get off the fucking net you damn nerd...get your self a life..Cus the only ill you'd Get Is If You Caught H.I.V. ...................Wait i forget you cant get a girl , Cus the Only way Marv feel's complete is by coming to R.V** Too forced dont disect names this much you can tell he bites,just Look How Fat His Stomach Looks,Cus after reading my verse Marvs gonna be well shook Im Throughin a fire punchlines that changes into a hook,So Watch Me Drop ''Marv'el,Like Fallin Comic Books... Tight closer VS dis kid's fruity his own sister lends him a skirt,i remember dis jerk! he got banned from RaP KNOWLEDGE for bitin mimesis verse.* 1st prod biting now nosis... good way to open been on rv 2 years still no1 notice dis clown,when im holdin da pound. talk slick ima do like "dogs in back yard's" & put "BONE in da ground". Dope ima make dis hoe hurt,punchlines aint u they just made ya flow worst. do any1 remember dis kid when he was iNDEPH,B.L.A or PROVERSE? Iggght no..ya like da "garbage train"..ya "tracks" are all "trash". when i break BONEs i dont mean da "weather" but u gon "four-cast". tight your gassed!...gettin fame battlin noobs whut da fuck u doin. like u got "cpu problems" cuzz with a 'gun' in ya fist u got "trouble-shootin". Nice dude stop..u'll neva be b.i.g or even 2 pac..watch you flop. da only time u'll be "ON da radio" is "sittin on ya boom box" Dope vote - mj just came doper, ayo nosis remember me its chief/crip back from ks and rd wassup Can u both return the favour on the battle in my sig please. |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
dis kid's fruity his own sister lends him a skirt,i remember dis jerk! he got banned from RaP KNOWLEDGE for bitin mimesis verse.* NICE PUNCH, DOPE PERSONAL been on rv 2 years still no1 notice dis clown,when im holdin da pound. talk slick ima do like "dogs in back yard's" & put "BONE in da ground". NICE NAMEPLAY, GOOD PUNCH ima make dis hoe hurt,punchlines aint u they just made ya flow worst. do any1 remember dis kid when he was iNDEPH,B.L.A or PROVERSE? NICE OPENER, WANST FEELIN THE PUNCH... no..ya like da "garbage train"..ya "tracks" are all "trash". when i break BONEs i dont mean da "weather" but u gon "four-cast". HAHAHHAHA.. VERY NICE PUNCH your gassed!...gettin fame battlin noobs whut da fuck u doin. like u got "cpu problems" cuzz with a 'gun' in ya fist u got "trouble-shootin". LMAO...GOOD WORDPLAY. dude stop..u'll neva be b.i.g or even 2 pac..watch you flop. da only time u'll be "ON da radio" is "sittin on ya boom box". NICE CLOSER, SUMS UP0 A GOOD VERSE. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'll Drop A Bomb.. We All Know 1009 Is A Long Way Gone.. Bone Will Murder This Guy-Dirty..... I'll BE Drunk On Baccardy.. But Sover Enough To Know That Jay/YAY Is Only Popular On Surpise-Partys!!.. NICE OPENER..WASNT FEELIN PUNCH TOO MUCH, AND DID IT RHYME? DINT IN MY ACCENT. I Got Knifes And Guns.. Marv Be Ready-To-Feel-Them.. You Locked In My Bars.. And You Aint Heading-Towards-Freedom.. You Dont Have To Be Smart To Know That *Nightmare is only dangerous* When Freedy-Is-In-Them!!.. (User Tittle) KINDA SELF GLORIFICATION AT FIRST, BUT GOOD PUNCH AND WORDPLAY. Dawg Foreal.. No-Hate.. Bones Will Crush Your Thoughs, Leaving You Completely Empty On Ya Souls-Fate.. I Aint A Math Teacher.. But I Know That On A Downscale *I AM After 10-09*.. Like 0-8!!.. (Think About It)* PRETTY NICE PERONAL... I'm Fast With Punches Like Tyson On A Corvette.. Massing With Bones?.. Holmes... That You'LL Regret.. You'll- Fall In This Thead.. That Hes *Initials Are M.J*.. Dont Mean This Guy Got Balls On The Net!!.. (OMG KO) YEA, HIT.... Get off the fucking net you damn nerd...get your self a life..Cus the only ill you'd Get Is If You Caught H.I.V. ...................Wait i forget you cant get a girl , Cus the Only way Marv feel's complete is by coming to R.V** NICE PERSONAL, ALTHOUGH THE SET UP IS THE MOST PLAYED CONCEPT EVER. you can tell he bites,just Look How Fat His Stomach Looks,Cus after reading my verse Marvs gonna be well shook Im Throughin a fire punchlines that changes into a hook,So Watch Me Drop ''Marv'el,Like Fallin Comic Books... NICE CLOSER. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE, BOTH CAME WITH GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS.. BOTH FLOWED WELL, BUT BONES LINES SEEM A LITTLE STRETCHED TO ME.. MARV GETS MY VOTE DUE TO HARDER HITTING PUNCHES AND PERSONALS, WHICKH WERE MORE CREATIVE. NO HATE RTF. |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
marv took this easily. bone: your verse was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to stretched, and your punches were too basic; so much in your lines, yet you had horrible punhces, poor personals that didn't hit at all, nothing really stood out, everything was pretty weak man, mainly because your lines dragged out too much, do something about that, then maybe you have a shot. marv: you came with some awesome lines man, great wordplay, and hard hitting punches....flow and structure were on point as well. overall, you totally annhilated this guy, i especially like the 'bone in the ground' line, that was funny as well as hard hitting....very creative in this, cleary you outmatched your opponent, and easily took this, keep up. v/marvjay...rtf, or i will get this removed |
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