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This was feedback posted for (Jimmy Pocketz)
checking votes... id say JP won but some..... i liked ya last bar........
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Voted For: Oz™
Breakdown Jimmy Pocketz This Kid callin Me Out? ..Only Time u Associate with Stars Probly Cuz Viewing "Oz" only Time u Associate with Bars ....Good..... Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal 2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical .......Better.... Ya Neva Get Respect.So Keep Fakein..And Keep Waitins Why Does ya Rec Neva Come out....Like Obese Patients ........:nono:... *Tell you Wha Speed Up ya Battles cuz u on Slow Focus Oz Punches are Juvenile they comin @ me "Slow Motion" .....Funny....... Please Pm Strobe...Im Blinding you Like Night Reflections U Lost? Cuz ya Avy aint even Movein in the Right Directions Kinda bad bcuz I cant see his avy inside the battle thread but Nice personal anyway LOL Overall man You had some good bars they couldve been better i think That You Lacked good concept but you had good wordplay and far as your pucnhez go ...they couldve been betetr you only have one bar that i really liked and thats the one with the (*) beside it so ........I cant give you my vote bcuz Oz dropped way much harder Oz the Oz is capable of destruction jimmy p..ya dig cuz i'll blow ya brains out......just like your new sig!! .....Good Personal... Jimmy P's determined to lose,leave him buried as deep as the name of his crew im throwin *chinese books* at Jimmy Pokets because Oz was made to *serve this foo/fool* ....LOL I Jus Got Threw Eatin some Foo LOL Nice bar you can check his tournament results, the kid didnt come handy i just stared and *snickered*,cuz da troop ran outta bars & i aint talkin bout candy ..:roll: ......That was Tight .... jimmy pocketz cant kill me...i'll just destroy him in many sections he's a tru troop? the only *nine's* he had was in his jordan collection .....Nice.... i'll remove you from this battle son...and leave jimmy pockets to rest cuz you always talkin bout bein the baddest...when ur one level below the best ...even Better Personal ... Overall i Think That your verse was Gettin Off to a bad start and then you dropped some Serious bars Like The snickers Bar Line ....>oh yeah That was Good and thats why I Hade to give you my vot ein this battle You came harder and you came consistent with punchez and Personals RTf In the battle link in my sig please |
Voted For: Oz™
jimmy may have me blacklisted so i will vote now just to see if i can so i dont have to waste time explainin for no reason.... |
This Kid callin Me Out? ..Only Time u Associate with Stars
Probly Cuz Viewing "Oz" only Time u Associate with Bars 5...weak, gud personal but you rhymed all the same words together. Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal 2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical 5...weak, ok wordplay but not a real good play off his old name. Ya Neva Get Respect.So Keep Fakein..And Keep Waitins Why Does ya Rec Neva Come out....Like Obese Patients 5...again, nuthin too creative, some filler and more of a statement than a punch. Tell you Wha Speed Up ya Battles cuz u on Slow Focus Oz Punches are Juvenile they comin @ me "Slow Motion" 5...you rhymed slow together, that was weak, and the bar was too basic. Please Pm Strobe...Im Blinding you Like Night Reflections U Lost? Cuz ya Avy aint even Movein in the Right Directions 6...decent closer, a gud play off the avy he has. OVERALL: 26/50 the Oz is capable of destruction jimmy p..ya dig cuz i'll blow ya brains out......just like your new sig!! 5...an ok play off the sig, but the setup was bleh!! Jimmy P's determined to lose,leave him buried as deep as the name of his crew im throwin *chinese books* at Jimmy Pokets because Oz was made to *serve this foo/fool* 6...LoL!!! kinda stretched but the chinese/foo concept was clever and funny. you can check his tournament results, the kid didnt come handy i just stared and *snickered*,cuz da troop ran outta bars & i aint talkin bout candy 5...the candy concept was nice, but you didnt really use it as a punch. jimmy pocketz cant kill me...i'll just destroy him in many sections he's a tru troop? the only *nine's* he had was in his jordan collection 5...played concept, and you kinda self-glorified much in the setup. i'll remove you from this battle son...and leave jimmy pockets to rest cuz you always talkin bout bein the baddest...when ur one level below the best* 6...decent closer, aight flow and a good personal. OVERALL: 27/50 that is my explanation for my vote Oz came with a couple ncie punches to JP's one nice punch... he was more consistent.....so he gets my vote!!! |
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Voted For: Oz™
EZ.......... jimmys verse was aight, had a good structure but seemed to be just too basic and the punches werent all hard hitting, personals were used but didnt take much effect. Best bar was : Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal 2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical And even that had a weak set up and played concept. Oz, your verse was nice, although the structure wasnt that good, your personals were harder hitting and had more creative punches. NO HATE RTF ASAP ON THE EC BATTLE OR THIS GETS DQ'ED :thumbup: |
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rtf man, vs EC if pss,
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Voted For: Oz™
good battle on both sides Jimmy Pocketz - u kinda disappointed me..i expected a harder verse from you..your first 3 barz i wasnt really feelin..but the last 2 were good..u some personals in there and the avy one was good..but i jus wished u woulda had more.....6/10 Oz - good verse overall..ur opener?..wasnt the best but its alright..from then on ur wordplay was very good..the snickers line made me laugh..and the chinese one..i like how u used the 9 and jordans line..very good punches.....8/10 Oz wins!!!!! |
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