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Topical 06-06-05 05:29 PM

uppin.............................................

Stanza 06-06-05 05:42 PM

Voted For: Topical

Yall Please RTF

Topical
You can't play me 'Dogg', this man isn't even crazy ya'll
So I'd have to teach him a few tricks to be a CrazyDogg
Not all that But An Aii Nameplay
My rhymes feed this feind like smoke from Snoop's trees
Like beans, your skill releases a stench that doesn't please*
..LOL Stank Ass beans LOL That was a coo Bar
Crazy cries, and the make-up ya applied is runin from ya eyes
Man I'm sick of your lies, ya secrets are what ya cant hide**
....Nice pErsonal...
"Put your hands aside, Hey!, this man isn't a guy, see!"
"Ya right, the makeup helped us see what he was disguising"
.........SaySo ......Wasnt All dat
OK so maybe your a CrazyDogg as you say you are 'Bitch'
Cuz I snitched bout what part of ys name implies truthfulness
....LOL That was str8

You Take this battle but Ima tell You know Up Ya Game bcuz You Still lack Certain Parts off being dope But You Aint Far From It keep it up and youll get somewhere ...

CrazyDogg

Beating kids is something that I can do anyday...
I never wanted to battle, but ya set it up anyway...
.....No Punch Jus an Insult
I know that might sound weak, but it's enuf to destroy him...
Poor guy is played like kids toys, maybe santa will employ him...
.......The concept in that bar was played
How ya gonna name ya self topical, when you can't write shit...
After reading my stuff you'll be "standin' up" like luda right quick...
...Too Many words but the concept was ok
Man I hope that you don't call the words you just wrote hot rhymes...
Making those rhymes....you'd lose money...literally you'll drop dimes..
....LOL That was Str8...
This battle was over-blown like a whirlwind blowin out the snot...
If ya brain explodes on ya keys....that's how you write ya thoughts
......Couldve been worded better

Aii BasicallY man I Think that You couldve worded your bars a lil better but You did have one bar that I Liked But You didnt Have an Overall better verse Than Topical

Srry

SUPERVILLAIN 06-14-05 10:29 AM

This was feedback posted for Topical
 
nice shit cutty..........do the damn thang fam.

^^^UPPIN' FOR MY CRHYMIE TOPZ!!!^^^


s.v. the kingpin, c.s.

Topical 06-30-05 10:31 PM

uppin.............................................


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