Nah, I think my boy OneStep won this one fa'real yo..

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Voted For: Stanza

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...


2 Many Played Concepts Dawg, Not Enough Hard Hittin Punz, I Lyked Da Wordplay 4 Da Most Part, But Few Linez Wuzza Lil Played, & U Had Less 2 Offer In Da Form Ov Personals

Best Line=
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,

Worst=
Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,

1st Line Wuz Meaningless & Da Second Line Iz Played 2 Fuck, Seemed Lyke Force Nameplay 2 Me


Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match

Good Verse, U Had Better Nameplay Than OneStepBeyond, A Few Decent Ideaz Also, Flow Seemed More Complex & Original Than OneStepBeyonds, Punz Were Not Anythin Special, Sum Hit Tho, Wordplay Wuz Iight & You Had A Few Pretty Decent Personalz, Ya Verse Wuz Da Mo' Enjoyable Read.

Vote=Stanza, Better All Round Verse Wid More Fluency & Consistancy In Da Flow & Disses

Return Da Vote In Mah Signature [or dis vote will be removed]

Good Job Both, Keep It Up, Pz Out


Crew vote removed.. looks as if Khaoz was posting in TBN up till 5/29

Thanx Mayne ...................Still Uppin ...............

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

stanza

Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
ehhh...decent...played concept...4/10
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
decent....5.5/10
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
weak....4/10
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
that was the best punch in your whole verse...6/10

overall-19.5/40(49%)

Onestepbeyond:

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
good...culdve been worded better...6/10
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
jjjjjeeeessssssuuuuuussssss...that was so played...3/10
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
ehhhh....5/10...wasnt feelin it to much
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
skraight...couldve been worded better as well...6/10
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
decent closer...6/10

overall-26/50(52%)

vote/onestepbeyond

Stanza...my advice to u is stop explainin so much shit in ur verses...most of them i was able to understand without u explaining...the only thing that should be explained is personals...and elevate ur wordplay......

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Voted For: Stanza

votes goes to stanza just cus he had more creativity in his he also had bettah punches dat hit har while onestep did good in his verse also i jus wasnt feelin it n his struceture was also bettah den your good battle and good verses from both of yall

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Opionion.Wow dis battle was pretty nice specialy with Onestep he canme way harder than Stanza. Stanza had some alright punches but i just didnt feel them as hard as Onestepbeyond's punches.

Flow- I was really feelin One's punches more N is flow it had me boucin my head a lil

Punches- One's had harder punches by ease N were a lil unique

Metas- Both were nice-

Personals- One's took to him hard with that no show

Winner- One took this with ease in my opionion. If Stanza was going aginst somebody less talented he would of had a better chance

RTF on my battles when u see em N drop feed back in my OM's

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
^^decent, feelin the personal
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
^^played to shit...not good
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
^^decent, but ive seen it b4
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
^^nice personal...
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
^^nice closer, decent verse
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Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
^^ok, but weak
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
^^koo, basi thou
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
^^nope, weak as baby shit
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
^^ok, but thats a played concept too..
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imma go with osb cuz his personals hit harder n his
concepts werent so played ..both were to basic thou, up the
wittyness guys...pz...no hate, RTF

someomne said they were going to win this with ease