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E.C 05-28-05 09:23 AM

uppin man this is nealy a wh9le page of ups... wheres the votes man

MyNamesGrafhYall 05-28-05 09:54 AM

Voted For: E.C

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!
i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren
i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!
Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''
how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics

Dat Verse Wuz 2 In-Consistant, U Had Sum Ok Punches & Personalz, But Sum Linez Dint Hit Hard, Better Luck Next Tephlon

it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,
hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",
i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"
15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",
so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,

Yo Structure Iz Fukked Wherre U Carry Linez On Lyke Dat, But U Had Da Better Personalz In Diz Battle, Flow Wuz Good Frum Both, But Fo Better Personalz Mah Vote Goez 2 E.C

Return Da Vote In Da Signature Plz

E.C 05-28-05 02:14 PM

thnx for the vote... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

E.C 05-28-05 05:52 PM

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E.C 05-29-05 07:06 AM

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E.C 05-29-05 04:49 PM

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E.C 05-30-05 02:42 PM

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B. Magik 05-30-05 03:22 PM

Voted For: E.C

Aiight...

Tephlon:

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!

NO...3/10

i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren

OK personal, nice punch...6/10

i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!

NOPE!!!! Weak man...3/10

Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''

Blah...5/10

how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics

Best line in your verse...7/10

Overall: 24/50 (48%)

Really weak verse man...Expected much more from you knowing what you are capable of...Your punches were not hitting at all and the only thing that made you verse halfway decent was your closer. No hate man, but you really fell off in this battle.

EC:

it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best

Decent wordplay in first line, punch was ass...4/10

hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",

Nice...good personal, nice punch...8/10

i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"

NO!! WEAK!!! 3/10

15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",

LOL...Nice shit...8/10

so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,

Nice personal, shoulda provided a link, but it was cool...6/10

Overall: 29/50 (58%)

Aiight you pulled thru...Your verse wasnt great but it was enuff for the win. Had a couple nice personals in there, punches were decent for the most part, and you had some decent wordplay.

No hate to Teph...

Dizzee Rascal 05-30-05 03:29 PM

This was feedback posted for E.C
 
it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,

Ok opener not strong though

hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",

Yeah i see the personal attempt but needs re=wording to be dope still a str8 hit though

i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"

Played

15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",

LoL Ok

so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself

Thats a decent finish

Dizzee Rascal 05-30-05 03:30 PM

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!

Ok personal

i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren

Niiiiice personal

i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!

Immature and wack

Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''

Er ok

how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics

Played

Dizzee Rascal 05-30-05 03:31 PM

Voted for EC i think it worked lol
Please vote unbiased on mine

E.C 05-31-05 02:28 PM

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Mad Dog 06-02-05 07:37 AM

Voted For: E.C

For the record...vote is a guarantee safe vote as i have already voted on both members for the same battle as previous anyway...

E.C verse:

it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,
^ good opener on the personal

hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",
^ LOLOLOL nice personal/moved into a punch nice bar

i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"
^ nice diss punch/personal on his crew

15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",
^ LOL nice punch/personal on his name made me laugh

so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,
^ personal on the closer wasn't as good but an aight closer

TEPHLON verse:

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!
^ Ok opener on the personal but not really a diss...more of a mentioning

i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren
^ personal on his girl...it's aight nuthin special though

i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!
^ fake personal -_- and the gay thing played

Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''
^ it's ok but it's nothing special again not ya best Tephlon

how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics
^ Closer = good personal and rhyme good best bit of ya verse IMO

Overall
IMO one sided...E.C had humour in his punches personals in most bars punches too blended in to be honest some real good stuff from him in this battle you gave it all in this...Tephlon on the other hand it's like you underestimated him coz your verse was basic man it jus wasn't as good as what i've seen to be honest...so my vote is for E.C

E.C 06-02-05 11:50 AM

ight thnx for the vote.... uppin for moreeeeeeeeeeeee

E.C 06-02-05 05:31 PM

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