Typing as I listen through my stock G4 speakers. I'll just coment on quality and execution.

First Verse: Vocals would have benefitted fomr recording a little further away to get that crunch out of em and some more echo in the BG to give it more ambiance to get that "dream-like state" going. The lyrics are pac-esque with a UK deliv.

Second verse: needs more annunciation and stop mumbling. has a textee-turned-audio type deliv.

Third verse: WAY nasal. sounds liek you're speaking directly thorough your nose. You need ot use some compressor on your5 vocals too so your volume is equal across the board instead of loud at times then quiet at others. Song it self was ok. Nothing that made me go "hmm..never looked at it that way" which I presume was the intent, but that's just me personally.

Hope this helped.

yo dooms that was freestyle.................lol nbut good looks

I'm Not Intrested In Da Quality Ov Sound, I'm Juz Intrested In Da Beat, & Ur Lyrikal Content.

I'm Not Sure Which Iz Which Out Ov Da 3 Ov U....First Verse=Good Flow, Ur Raspy Vocals Stood On Da Whole Track, It Wuz Kinda Lyke Ur Track & Da Others Juz Featurin On It, Cuz Da Beat Suited U Down 2 a T, Raspy Flow Matched Up 2 Da Beat, It Wuz A Lil Gangsta, I Wuz Feelin Dat...Second Verse: Good Shit, Ur Lyrikal Content Wuznt Az Strong As Da First Guy Who Dropped, But Da Diffrent Style U Had In Yo Flow Suited Diz Collab Perfectly, Good Job...Third Verse=Good Lyrical Content, I'm Talkin Fiyah, Ur Flow & Vocals Didnt Seem Rite 4 Diz Beat & Da Other 2 Guys Stood Out A Lil More Than U Did, But Ur Emotion & Content In Da Lyrics Cannot Be Faulted

Yall Came Live Wid It, Good Job, Each Style Complimented Each Other, First Dudes Raspy Flow Wuz Da More Suited 2 Da Beat But Dat Dont Mean 2 Say The Other 2 Guyz Didnt Shine On Diz, Good Job All

^^^ that first guy was dope eh :evilgrin:

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wow so much damn feedback...BY ME

wtf why not up.