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TeamOne 06-02-05 06:48 AM

Voted For: M-Eazy

When RV decides whose hot you at the bottom of the pot
I’ll kill you before I son you, like my name was Scott *
.... lo decent opener with the wordplay and meta, but its alil SG
U couldn’t spit hotshh, if you were tha man himself**
And you comfortable with failing, cause you defend ya self
..... aight, ok
Dissin you is too easy, like slut hoes on tha corner
You could be a vet, I’ll take ya spot like u was Kurt Warner***
... this bar was decent but not all that funny or hard hittin
Saying you could win me. Spf…that’s a PROBABLY NOT
I’ll shove a gat down ya throat so you could really down shots
..lol. nice line, funny, but i dont really feel that gangsta shit... but u only used it to get that punch out
This guys a wanksta…white witta du rag cap?
Even if yo knee-grows (negros), you still wont be black
... ehhh not reallu feelin this...... ive seen that "knee-grows" shit, and im not talkin about in another battle, just in general
So run and tell tha site, how quick my 5 votes coming
I’m tha bully in this verse, and I’m taking ya lunch money
.......weaknesss

u had a decent verse but i think u fell of at the end......... decent use of wordplay to make for a harder punch at the end. but u had a few that werer just thrown in there with no good setups or anythin, and some was a lil self-glorification, altho thats not too bad...

Brains You Dont Have...Either 'Jeans Onya Mind'...Or Ya Thoughts Jus Sag
M Suffers From Jet-Lag...Mad? His Pussies Ancient...Keep Fuckin Old Hags!
...... fake personal, ur shits alil stretched but good flow
Told Him He Stupid...He Cried 4 A 'Shot Of Genius'...Got Einstein From Cupid
When Niggas Hear His Music.....They Cotton-Swab.....Ears Filled Wit Q-Tips!
..... lol, thios was decent, i see potential
M-Eazy aka Dickhead...Been Lame! Couldnt 'BEE-SMART' Wit A 'Buzz Brain'
He Lost His Senses Last Yr??.....No Wonder Ya Raps Dont FEEL Ashamed!
...... nah, not feelin this bar, coulda been worded better
M I'm Serious!...Shits Dead Real....Compared 2 Me, You Really Have No Skill!
Eazy Your Diseased...If U Think U Signed....Must Be A Hypochondriac Deal!
..... lol, this was pretty creative and decent
Give Me A Reason Not To Smoke This Ho......Blatantly Dispose His Photos
Shit..I Drop Loads....Like 'Throat Submission'....Dis Fagget CHOKE-HOLDS!
ok closer..... it was the best worded bar of ur verse

i see some potential for u to be real good but u needa find some personals and harder punches to throw in there to get that "ohhhhh!" effect from ur verse........ right not u just have bars with alotta metas and shit, but with no hard hittin punch or personal to finish it off

V/M-Eazy

M-Eazy 06-02-05 10:12 AM

3-0=KO...this shit is ova...Good battle ack..Stay up homie!


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