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Voted For: RobKilla
RobKilla: u silly boy... ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does Ok..4/10..Not Hard Hiting U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect" Ugh...Ok 4/10 but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness, but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness Blah...3/10 God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins Decent..5/10 girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes? Ok..4/10 Overall: 20/50 PicturePerfect2: oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag' Blah..4/10 avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up Nice..6/10 u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it Blah..4/10 so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'? cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job? Blah..4/10 im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past Wow..Beat...3/10 Overall: 21/50 My Vote - Picture For Better Overall Verse and Shit.. RTF ON MY KING SOLO BATTLE... ~R~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag' 6...LoL!! nice concept and good punch here, nice opener. avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up 7...wordplay was nice, at first i thought you was calling him talented, but then i read again, nice punch. u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it 5...not feelin this line.....rhymin is off a touch. so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'? cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job? 6...decent punch, a good concept with the 9 to 5 shit. im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past 5...not feelin this, talkin about you getting BJ's was kinda gay. OVERALL: 29/50 u silly boy... ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does 5...ok personal....not really feelin the setup to the punch though, it was kinda weak. U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect" 4...this was gay, that whole pussy concept was really wack and childish. but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness, but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness 5...too basic to be real hard hitting. God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins 5...ok concept, not really used as an affective punch. girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes? 6...finally a decent punch, i was feelin the 2nd line on this, first was kinda wack. OVERALL: 25/50 ok drops from both.... picture came more consistent... had some good concepts for punches and used them well, flowed nicely, personals were on point, some ok wordplay in there but still cud be a little better.... rob was consistent, not hard hittin with the punches though, had that nice closer, but mostly you were either too basic or just no real punch in ya bars..... V/ - pictureperfect2 RTF!!! on the marv, stanza, or daubs battle.....links in my sig.. |
Voted For: pictureperfect2
oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag' DECENT ENOUGH OPENER avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up NICE PERSONAL, WAS FEELIN IT u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it NOPE, NICE FLOW IN SET UP, BAD PUNCH. so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'? cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job? HAHAHA NICE ONE... im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past YEAH, PLAYED CONCEPT BUT STILL HIT. _______________________________________________ ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does OK OPENER, NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH. U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect" NICE WORD/NAME PLAY,M GOOD PUNCH. but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness, but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness NOPE, BAD CONCEPT AND PUNCH. God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins YEAH OK.... girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes? MEH, OK CLOSER I GUESS. __________________________________________________ OVERALL PP2 GETS MAH VOTE FOR STAYING MORE CONSISTANT WITH PUNCHES AND BETTER PERSONALS. ROB YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT BUT THE ONLY DOPE PERSONAL/PUNCH WAS THE PURFECT LINE. NO HATE |
Voted For: pictureperfect2
RobKilla - nice verse..good personal with the opener..i like the wordplay with the puurfect line..very creative..u had good punches in ur verse..everything flowed well and ur structure was cool.....7/10 pictureperfect - u had a nice verse as well..ur opener was very creative..that line killed him..the next bar was a very good personal..i liked how used that against him..ur closer was a bit weak though..but i think u won, only by a point.....8/10 pictureperfect wins!!!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does ^^ok, but i wasnt feeling the person, didnt connect U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect" ^^seen this in cyphers/tc/wack..... but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness, but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness ^^weak, stretched bad .. God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins ^^decent, didnt connect well thou girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes? ^^decent, but it didnt connect well. . overall your verse was consistent but lacked proper wording n hard hitting punches towards your opponent, a played concept was the purfect line/pussy..blah, it wasnt great anyhow...closer was ok, nothin special in this verse to be honest homie... ./. . oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag' ^^decent, feeling the concept avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up ^^ok, not feelin it much thou u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it ^^forced ryhme scheme...ok, punch so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'? cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job? ^^lol,...this had releventcy to me considering ive seen that line"purfect"b4 im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past ^^ok, but setup n punch were irrelevant to each other keep the concept similar for your punches...... . . overall i was feeling a couple bars more then robkillas this battle can honestly go either way cuz you both came equally as good/bad....some stuff was plain boarderline wack but some was a good personal...both need wordplay n better nameplays.. |
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
RobKilla ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does Pictures blowing up doesn't have anything to do with him. When you attempt a personal you have to make it relevant.. 4/10 U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect" This is just a statement. Why did your set up, not set up your punch? Make the first line set up the punch, yours didn't set up shit. And, then your punch was just a statement. You attempted to make a personal, but it was worded horribly.. 3/10 but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness, but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness This was another statement, and another set up that had nothing to do with the punch. Saying there's no method to his madness doesn't connect at all. You are just saying shit. You need to re word your shit into punches and not just saying random stuff.. 3/10 God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins This concept was decent, but it's like you forced it a little. In your set up you should have worded it a little differently, but the concept was still decent.. 6/10 girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes? Yeah, your set up still had nothing to do with the punch, but your punch was just a statement. You need to word it differently yo. The concept was average at best, but it could have passed as good if you would have worded it differently.. 4/10 Overall - 20/50 Pictureperfect oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag' This was wack. The concept is played. If you're going to talk about shooting him you need to add in a little wittiness.. 3/10 avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up Lmao. This is the best punch I've seen in this battle yet. Good concept, good wording.. 8/10 u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it This shit is played. Talking about how high he can count? That shit isn't very good yo.. 4/10 so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'? cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job? Uhh.. This concept is a little played.. you worded it differently though, so it's pretty average.. 5/10 im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past This was wack as fuck and you know it.. 2/10 Overall - 22/50 Vote - Pictureperfect |
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