Get on AIM ho.....................................

Voted For: Anamosity

I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle
^^liked, but not very hard hitting
This Faggot Couldn't Drop A Tight Verse If You Came With A Ratchet
^^just decent
This Kid's RapVerse Career Aint Going No Where..........Just Face-It-Fairy*
Your Flow Is Like An Parked Car Running...............It Remains Stationary
^^be better if u said his career... but decent concept

rev-

Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it,
Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did.
^^dencet wordplay and punch, but a lil self glorification, and i hate that shit.

vote-wall for more lines that i felt...

return the favor...link...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192634

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I had more than a closer but whatever. I'm gonna return the favors I owe today.

Voted For: Anamosity

the revelation:
Self esteem suffered, sorry Isaiah but even the Bible leaves ya in doubt,
Only reason he is an original RB member, is because he wanted my account!
^^^VERY WEAK OPENER...WHO CARES IF U BEEN ON DID SITE FOR LIKE 8 YEARS
He took every account I had to try and hide his true ID,
Getting taught topicals and living with his mom till he’s over 18!
^^^^^LMAOOO...SINCE WHEN DID ID & 18 RYHME...EVEN WITH A ACCENT DIS SHIT DONT RYHME
Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it,
Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did.
^^^^WAIT WAIT...HAD IT...HOW YA GIRL DID...LMAOOOOOO DAT SOUND SO FUKKIN NEWBISH...Y DID U EVEN TRY DA BATTLE IF IT AINT A TOPICAL

ima make it fair and just vote on 6 of his lines 2

anamosity:
The Revelation 'Change His Name' So Much He Lost Is 'Identification'
His Punches Don't Exist Like Paraplegics Jumping & That's Revelation
^^DECNT/PERSONAL
I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle
60 Seconds Of Fame Is Up.... Left It Short Term Like A Infomercial
^^^WEAK
Like Ciara's Sex Change, The Doc's Will End Up Patching-His-Frame
Golden Dayz Is At An End Man, His Condition Is Matching-His-Name
^^^UHH OKAY......IM NOT VOTIN AGAINST REVELATION MORE THA IM VOTIN 4 ANAMOSITY...CUZZ DAT NIGGA VERSE LOOK LIKE HE TYPED IT WEARIN A BLIND FOLD HE DIDN'T HAVE NO PUNCHLINES...JUST 1 WEAK PERSONAL

Wow, what an idiot................................

Voted For: Anamosity

The Revelation 'Change His Name' So Much He Lost Is 'Identification'
His Punches Don't Exist Like Paraplegics Jumping & That's Revelation
^^wasnt feelin this opener, punch didnt connect
I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle
60 Seconds Of Fame Is Up.... Left It Short Term Like A Infomercial
^^nah, this was weak
Like Ciara's Sex Change, The Doc's Will End Up Patching-His-Frame
Golden Dayz Is At An End Man, His Condition Is Matching-His-Name
^^decent
Ya Not Hott Like Matches.........Even Though Your Hair Color Match It*
This Faggot Couldn't Drop A Tight Verse If You Came With A Ratchet
^^simple, setup was good but punch lacked
Release A Gas Bubble & Light A Match And You Still Can't Spit Flames
You Garbage Kid, In All Your Text Battles All I Saw Was You Rip Lames
^^??...punch was worded wrong...hurt the bar
Can't Battle A Real Vet, Kid I've Got More Referrals Then You Got Wins
I Hear You Like Soccer........Cuzz You Got Balls To Your Head And Shins
^^decent, worded a little off but its ok
Your Text And Sig Making Skill Is Relevant Kid......Cuzz The Both Suck
You Should Stop Now For I See Your Work Get Taken By Trash Trucks
^^simple again
I Hear You Got Chick Problems & That's Just On Your Net Connection
You Got 4000 Post Bin Here Since July......And Still Ned Vet Protection
^^nah, thats weak, vet protection..?..lol
Bitch Learn How To Spell.....Exponent Always Catch An 'L', It's To 'Easy' *
His Girl Said It's Over, So He Got On His Knees Begging Don't Leave Me
^^nope,...wack
This Prick Juggle Balls Like 'Tha Q' If You Notice His Name Say's & Reps
So He Joined Sigfried And Roy In Las Vegas........And Filmed Up Gay Sex*
^^wasnt feelin it
This Kid's RapVerse Career Aint Going No Where..........Just Face-It-Fairy*
Your Flow Is Like An Parked Car Running...............It Remains Stationary
^^decent punch
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overall you had 2 slightly decent bars, you gotta work on your
delivery n creativity.concepts were for the most part simple
n had very little personal/punches that were effective..
wording fell off in a few areas but verse was consistent
other then that...you need wordplay n better personals...



Self esteem suffered, sorry Isaiah but even the Bible leaves ya in doubt,
Only reason he is an original RB member, is because he wanted my account!
^^decent, but stretched,, ok punch thou
He took every account I had to try and hide his true ID,
Getting taught topicals and living with his mom till he’s over 18!
^^ok, ryhme scheme was fucked here, dont matter how you say it, it just doesnt work, sorry, punch was personal but not creative.
Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it,
Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did.
^^ nah wasnt feelin this, punch was wack..
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overall, shorten ya bars, stay away from dissing your girl through a girlfreind or weak personals such as the 18 thingy
thats not a diss fam, its a lame statement that has no real
bearing in a text battle..get some wordplay in your verses.
work on your concepts n connecting your punches bettter.
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overall i gotta go with wall street for the simple fact alot of his verse was better written n had better delivery..
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no hate fam....

Voted For: Anamosity

Yo lol words cant describe how one sided this battle is........but good drops nun the less.....
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The R.- come on dog 6 lines?? 6 LINES?....any way
i think you had a good peice here other than the last bar you were doin great....we dont see you battlin alot anymore and its good to see you on the Lines again......witch is more than what i can say for ma self...and i think i really dont need to dicekt it cause this was pretty one sided.....but any way but anyway good peice..
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Wall St.-well there isnt much to say other than Holy Crap you over whelmed him........good drop fo real...and again this was pretty one sided.....so i gotta give it to St.
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Both Holla on AIM!