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Voted For: GKillaz05

Easy imo.

Saskilla's fast to use a filla in all of his whack spits...
You explain to much shit and your flow is whack as it gets...

MEH OK OPENER.

Im takin' a shit on this fool like he was the damn toilet...
Only time you spits are sick, is when you punches spoil it...

YEAH, WAS OK.

Treat this like a royal spit, im the king your just a jester...
Your lyrics are not goin' to pass, like failin' a semester...

NICE WORDPLAY

Blowin' up your bars like uncle fester, you cant fight back...
I'd KO his ass right now but I think this bitch might rat...

WAS OK, NOT A BAD CLOSER.

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When I crush this fuck, GKillaz will be resting in the ocean.
N I don't know what's worse, ya verse, or the fact that ya posting.

YEAH, GOOD PUNCH NICE OPENER.

Watch my punches unfold, grab ya attention n the magic disperse.
Because you know ya gonna say I'm fulla shit, AFTER I ate ya verse.

YEAH WAS OK.

I'll squash this chump, my heavy bar's ain't neede to kill this bitch.
The way I shut this fucking dummy up, you'd think I was a ventriloquist.

YEAH WAS OK.

I'm fuming I'll clamp down on this fool, fuck what ya story is.
Because all ya avy did, was make B.I.G. a little less notorius.

NOT FEELING, DIDNT REALLY DISS HIM.
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CLOSE OVERALL, BUT FOR MORE CONSISTANT PUNCHES AND BETTER WORDPLAY AND BEING MORE CREATIVE G GETS IT.

NO HATE.