haha...funny shit!! 6/10....good story, just improve the vocab and it would be alot better!

thanks thanks.. but yall missin the point about the vocab, you know slick rick uses all them damnnn simple words, thats what i was doin, so its not like i cant use vocab, i got mad words lol it jus wasnt the right rhyme to use em in.. thanks for tha feed peace1

exactly. you dont have to use vocab. just be you. you can do without the vocab to be a sick emcee.

ayyo thanks man.. feelin tha love haha .. uppin for some more feed

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