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Voted For: One M.B.

MUTHAFUCKIN SICKNEESS, that was hot M.B. that was def hot. Khaoz u were sick wit it there, but M.B. got u on this one.

Khaoz: Youre flow was hot, punches hit hard,m I was feelin, and I didnt really see any flaws apart from it seemed like bits of it were jus added in as fill ins.

One M.B. - This was sick, great drop, kept me laughin the whole way through. Great battle verse IMO got khaoz beat.

No denyin it kid, ya spit wackness, is that all's ya do?
I mean damn ya weak…I seen games’a badminton with more balls than you,

i'ma rapper divine, so sick when i spit i'm needin to puke,
knew i had dickriders, but I didn't think you was leadin the group

Makin ya bleed from ya tooth, down like dawn, get on my dick 'n ya bound to fall
Shafted…………………… you'd be a better mc if ya made no sound at all..

Best bits there, RTF WITH MY BATTLE WITH MURDZ

Ok, Thanx 4 Da [honesty?] Upping 4 More Votes Pplz!

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Voted For: One M.B.

yes, i definately think OMB took this one.

khaoz: you came out with personals, which is good, but they were weak and poorly worded, so they weren't that good at all. the punches you attempted, were very poor, i've actually read alot better from you. nothing really stood out here at all, just work on creativeness and wordplay, because you had decent concepts, just did not pack anything to back up the punch. keep up though.

OMB: pretty nice verse, yes, not really any personals, but the punches made up for them. creative, witty, and flowed perfect. a little self-glor though, but meh, was not that big of deal, you still owned in this one.

v/OMB, for harder punches. rtf.

Voted For: One M.B.

your rhymes r tight bro.....slik flo is ma name....bout to make KhAoZ ThEoRy go back to his mamma looking upon shame

Voted For: One M.B.

Alright i think One Man Band got this shit here... heres how imma break it down... IM NOT INCLUDING THE VERSES.. JUST THE EXPLANATIONS THAT CORRESPOND TO THE BAR.

OMB
1. Nice line... i would have changed the first part of it though, but the 2nd line of the bar was put together nicely... 7/10
2. Haha.. last line was good... first line has nice multis... 8/10
3. Good line.... if yeh dont get it.. badminton = not played with a ball.... 8/10
4. It's waldo... but i could see the intention. 6/10
5. Not bad line.. a good punch i must say.. hit nice 8/10
6. Played bar man.. phatter & puking... played a lot.. 4/10
7. hahaha nice line.. worded kinda weird.. but works.. 6/10
8. eh... not really feelin it much.. but it works..... 6/10
9. if this is ur closer.. it didnt hit as hard as i expected... but works with ur entire verse.. 7/10

1. Not feelin the line....kinda personal.. but really didnt hit that hard to me.. 7/10
2. Just no... first of all 2 5 cent coins does not make a dime.. it makes 10 cents.. not the actual dime coin.. therefore it just went downhill from there... wording was messed on this line... 5/10
3. Urrm not feelin it 100%... i see the concept but the working just didnt work for me.. like i know what ur doin but it just wasnt thrown together properly 6/10
4. Doesnt work.. punch doesnt hit hard because OMB has elevated.. and his tutorial is good... soo if it was a personal.. its not hittin hard.. 6/10
5. Not bad.. not amazing like WHOA but it works in the verse... overall id give it a 8/10
6. Ummm.... not feelin it.. sharks with no fins... come on man.... 5/10
7. wordplay is ummm okay.. not as good as what i would expect from wordplay... work on that 7/10
8. Not bad.. worked with the multis etc.. overall its only worth a 7/10.. nothin really whoa to it
9. Closer was aight... nothin special.. wasnt feelin it much.. same liek OMB.. not feelin it..

Overall OMB is takin this.. his flow was nicer, he had nice multis and nice punched... Yeah Khaoz had some personals.. they werent hitting hard.. work on that man....

vote - OMB..


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^^^ Don't be gay and hate because i may have voted against you.. i gave you good imput on the battle.. its just my opinions... good luck...

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

Alright battle!
Chekin pollZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LoL the reason why i didnt vote didnt wanna waste my time n shyt!(FOO!)just wanted to see if you losin!which i alreafy knew!(LoL)

uppin.....

I'll be returnin all ya favors when i get home tonight...

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

Checking the polls, looks like a good battle.......

Ok, I Wuld Get Da ''Slik Flo'' Vote Removed, Homeboys And Asshole, But I Guess In Diz Case Defeat Iz Inevitable

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

both did a god job in this battle a very close battle alot of punches personals flows are both in a tight battle but my vote is gonna have to go to Khaoz though cuz i liked one of his lines the best one ofd the both verse in my opinion
"Addicted 2 RV Money, Askin 4 Billions, But Ur Da ''Realest Around''? [huh]
Wat ''Cat''...Act ''Intellectual''? But Really..u Dont Kno HOW STUPID U SOUND!***"
that line was the best so my vote goes to khaoz though it was a close battle that line just made me laugh so good job to both