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Voted For: kid~ca$
ya punches made sense, but they wasnt hard or nothing. they was most def better and more legit than your opponents, cause his shit, didnt flow...or diss. so congrats. you get my vote due to actually dropping a credible verse. shit was aight, nothin special, but you still took this battle. good luck on RV. vote: kid ca$ |
werd thanx fer tha feed uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Voted For: kid~ca$
ermm iu dont no what to say... i would break this down but big_dawg had the most awful structure i have ever seen... kid ca$: u murdered him easily punches hit and they were consistant... wordplay wasnt really good but you had some punches which is a plus... flow was decent and your structure was good also... just try to elevate on youyr punches find better concepts and word your punches better other than that your verse was solid good job fam... big_dawg: damn man this was awful fix your punches structure flow wordplay and your consistancy, coz im sorry for saying this but it was real wack fam... try to put your lines like this: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx so it will be easier to read an make people enjoy it more trust me... u need to elevate on your punches like i said to da$ think of punches that are relevent to the battle not about cash n shit thats wank so ye focus on them things and you'll get better..... v/ ca$ for having a more consistant verse |
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Voted For: kid~ca$
Lmfao... God, this was a pointless battle...Casper whooped him...better punches, better flow, way better structure...this was no contest here...Big_Dawg...you need to fix everything...don't make your verse like one big paragraph...structure it like a poem...thats how you do text...work on your punches as well... No contest. No Hate. |
Voted For: kid~ca$
..........................you won |
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