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Voted For: Archangel
WHats up Arch??? Long time no see... No contest.... Arch has this one.....SCI COCK.... you were a little happy about your slef battleing Arch. (Toget your ass wooped) you talked about yourself too much..... focus on dissing arch... Arch that was some mad.... shit... i like it... I lke the cholesteral line.... Killer funnny!... keep the shit up! Return the fava!.. ~One~ |
Voted For: SCI CON
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Voted For: SCI CON
this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls, yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol, an okay opener im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes, fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles, nope ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream, im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine, weak lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it, then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit, flow was too-stretched.. punch wasn’t great your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me okay arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel decent punch someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary weak closer overall this battle was weak here.. SCI took this one though punches were just a little bit harder.. flow was aight.. & the structure was okay.. overall both of u need to elevate more too.. and SCI stop using the ~ <--those.. cuz their wack in ur rhymes |
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Voted For: Archangel
ehh i think it was a wack battle sci con had the multies but arch took this one. i think ya openor was good but it sounds lick i heard it b4 ya whole verse was ok average and so was sci but it looks like you dissed him more on the account that you had more lines v/ archangle |
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Voted For: Archangel
this was no competition at all.......sci con.....u gotta elevate son......say this was a dick riding vote all u like but archangel merked you.....really i didnt feel your verse one bit... flow vocab punches all go to arch............... |
Voted For: SCI CON
your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me nice multis arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel ha funny good multis.. someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary nice ending good punch good multis nice drop.... 9/10 good multis nice punch creative and all with a personal nice.... this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls, yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol, ha nice start... im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes, fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles, nah i aint feeling this.... ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream, im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine, aight, freedy is a play concept... lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it, then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit, not feeling this bar weak... u had a good bar but then it fell off badly... but good try fam keep elevating.... 5/10 |
Voted For: SCI CON
this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls, yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol, ^^This dun rhyme and played concept.... im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes, fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles, ^^^nah...suked ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream, im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine, ^^^whack.......not a punch lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it, then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit, ^^^whack.....not a punch Problem with your verse was that you kept talking about yourself instead of the oppenent.Focus more on dissing.Add wordplay and metas too.And ur 1st bar....the closest one to a punch....didn't rhyme. your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me ^^^not a punch arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel ^^not a punch someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary ^^^OK.....best line in the verse. Same thing with you.U had one bar that was a punch and 2 that wasn't.Only thing different between you and the other guy was that ur one punch had flow in it.So you got it,. Weak battle Vote-SciCon(drop a vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197357 |
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