Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

ight u asked me to drop an honest vote khaoz so her it goes fam....

barz:

This man is just weak, you cant handle the heat, you damaging me?
How? When you couldn't "get a sweet bar" from the "candy machine"
^^ lol nice opener good wordplay
You're hardly a threat.........................So why he wanna try me for?
When I could easily "cook this cat".................like a "chinese store" *
^^ lol chinese cook cats... nice again
I dont give a fuck what this maggot say, but if he think's this cats afraid
Then He will get "slapped on his face"...............kinda like "after shave"
^^ good concept not played
Just stop the lies, face it fam, you'll never be hot with rhymes
So watch me "Put an end to KhAoZ".....................like a "compromise"
^^ not really feeling this

overall i thought u had a really strong verse execpt for the last bar which i wasn't feeling... just touch up on your structure and you'll be well on your way fam good verse keep it up :D


khaoz:


Ur ''Killin Mics?'' Yeah, Okay, But Only If U ''Cut Da Cord''
Sure 8 Lines Aint 2 Much?[for u]. Wuldnt Want Peeps Gettin Bored
^^ ok first line was dope second line was played
Oh Lord, Another Played Name Biggin Up His ''Sick Azz Bars''*
Only Tyme Hiz Mic Rhymes Hit Major Punchlines==
============He Edited His Head On Da Avatar
^^ not feelin it or the ='s
So Ur ''Untouchable''? Or Iz It People Dont Wanna Touch U
Ur ''Ghost'' 2 Girls=
So Dat Explains Da Scream n Scatter Wen U Say ''Boo''
^^ lol played concept again
Who Says We Want 2 ''Bend U''..Aint Ya' Happy Bein Str8?
=Obsessed Wid ''Barz''=
An I Appreciate Da ''Challenge''..But I'm Sure U'll Find An ''In-mate!''
^^ nice wordplay on his name and prison i liek this..

overall i thought most of your verse was played, your last bar was the only decent bar u had in this verse... i personally thought u can come alot harder than this but u didnt so i cant really say mich about it in this one....

v/ barz for haviong harder punches better structure and better concepts for punches pz...


rtf link is in the sig pzzz

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Barz u had this one cause ur strucutre and flow wasn't fucked up like KhAoz i think he chould get wit better structure ( NO HATE ) barz got this from me handz down khaoz work on ya shits a little bit and u can become a vet na mean barz of steel on ya way flow was tight punches connected 1 after another u know so i gotta give this to you vote from me Red Flag Official Vote I gotta give it to ma main min . Barz Of Steel. .