This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

checkin polls.........daubs is that man!!!!!........

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Voted For: Daubs


Aii Total Breakdown

red Flag
Ya mouths a chatter-box wit dick ya ass is Love Struck
Don't be a bitch homie and say well that vote is begginer's Luck
First Line was Str8 2nd Line Lacked Concept
I begin to tuck, the automatic before i release and have u a death-ceremony
I get AROUND like pepperoni's and let u have face 2 dirt matrimony's
LOL Face 2 dirt That was Nice
Please check ma stance im ready to dance and knock ma face out ya glance
Let the impact hit hard like the loss to Steve Nash ya crew got no chance
.....Umm Sayso But It wont all dat
Uk. original gangsta's rep that fuck u and weak wanabe hood
I blow ya mainstream of blood out ya ears so you can hear wutz good
Um The wsecond lines concept is kinda played bcuz I read like 12 of those same lines this week LOL no Offense
Livin'Legends are Miss-ing u need a telescope to get ya shit seen
Yet you still battle cats the age of 3 and ya ass if Fifteen
Aii personal But No Strong Impact as a Punch
Killin cats wit wack tracks is my fuckin rap career Hobby
Got a gay name yes im straight with that claim this dudes name is Daubney
...2st Line was like dissing yourself But The second line Was good

Overall i think That You couldve done a Whole lot betta On The concept area but Your wording was good But Yet you lacked hard hitting pucnhez so try to work on that

Daubs
We know this bitch is cowardly, hence every loss another name change..
And the only way u raise the red flag, is when the white ones stained.. *
LOl Damn nice personal followed by a Nice punch
Like iraq leaders, your ERA is over so ima lower the FLAG we allso sick of..
And your skill is missed.....like the start of your past names posted above!!**
..Nice Naemplay Punch shouldve hit harder considering the nameplay but Hey it was cool
After the votes done your murdered.....so your aka the living dead..
Only reason people stop to read your verse... is coz its in light red.. ***
...Im Not gonna Lie .....Thats the only reason I did ..srry LOL
Your impossible, but only because of the way you aint got no chance..
And the only time u have a change of heart....is with an organ transplant..
....LOL Original But yet It Dint Hit hard as the rest
Poor thing never had a chick, so no wonder flags heart is aching..
And bad news travels fast........the only way you be over taking!!
,....Nuttin Specail
You could compare me to insulin, the way my rhymes are injected..
And il leave ya like the sig you made....laughed at and rejected!! ****
:shocked: gameover that ended it rii there

overall i think Thagt You did good excepting one bar that I sytedt that it was nuttin specail but the rest was great LOL Really ripped it your punchez hit hard your personals were beyond fabolous so ima give you my vote

Please RTf In any battle link In My sig Please Honestly


and battle stats are in my sig also :roll:

Voted For: Daubs

I think daubs got this..

Daubs -
1. Nice opener... good punches.. 8/10
2. hah.. guess it aind bad... good punch.. 7/10
3. not bad.. but not amazing 6/10
4. not bad.. not amazing again... 6/10
5. errr not feelin it.. 5/10
6. haha not a bad punch.. and personal.. 8/10

Red
1. not a good opener.. shoulda been a punch.. 6/10
2. weak.. no personal no punch.. not feelin 3/10
3. not feelin it.. again kinda weak there... 4/10
4. k fuck it.. its pretty much all filler from here... seriously... work on that shit.. you aint winnin this battle....

DAUBS u got this... hands down..

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Voted For: Daubs

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Daubs:

We know this bitch is cowardly, hence every loss another name change..
And the only way u raise the red flag, is when the white ones stained.. *
Ok, but Not Worded The Best..5/10
Like iraq leaders, your ERA is over so ima lower the FLAG we allso sick of..
And your skill is missed.....like the start of your past names posted above!!**
Ugh...Decent..6/10
After the votes done your murdered.....so your aka the living dead..
Only reason people stop to read your verse... is coz its in light red..
Not Good...3/10
Your impossible, but only because of the way you aint got no chance..
And the only time u have a change of heart....is with an organ transplant..
Ok...5/10
Poor thing never had a chick, so no wonder flags heart is aching..
And bad news travels fast........the only way you be over taking!!
Ok Word Play..5/10
You could compare me to insulin, the way my rhymes are injected..
And il leave ya like the sig you made....laughed at and rejected!! ****
Haha Ok..6/10

Overall: 30/60

Red Flag:

Ya mouths a chatter-box wit dick ya ass is Love Struck
Don't be a bitch homie and say well that vote is begginer's Luck
Wow..That Was Wack..2/10
I begin to tuck, the automatic before i release and have u a death-ceremony
I get AROUND like pepperoni's and let u have face 2 dirt matrimony's
Ok Word Play..3/10
Please check ma stance im ready to dance and knock ma face out ya glance
Let the impact hit hard like the loss to Steve Nash ya crew got no chance
Ok..3/10
Uk. original gangsta's rep that fuck u and weak wanabe hood
I blow ya mainstream of blood out ya ears so you can hear wutz good
Ok..4/10
Livin'Legends are Miss-ing u need a telescope to get ya shit seen
Yet you still battle cats the age of 3 and ya ass if Fifteen
Weak..2/10
Killin cats wit wack tracks is my fuckin rap career Hobby
Got a gay name yes im straight with that claim this dudes name is Daubney.....
Weak Closer...2/10

Overall: 16/60

My Vote - Daubs For Better Overall Verse.

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