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This was feedback posted for White Powder
checkin the pollz.....................................
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Bump this up to the damm roof..........................
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bump bump bump..................................
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Stop sleeping..............................Bump this up
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Uppinnnnnnnnnn uppity up up upppppppppppppppppppp............................. ..............
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Voted For: White Powder
first young blaze....blaaaaoooooooo Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays pretty played...but was a punch U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes i liked the word play in this line U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's this was ok i dont like the whole G thing 2nd lines was ok simple wordplay U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers meh, i didnt like it, i never like lines that have gun shot stab, or some hood type punch in it Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... meh, its blah blah (W)hite Powde(R) ^^^sit.......back on Psa Bench. overall an ok verse, you had some wordplay most of it was simple punches were ok nothing great, i would say keep elevating and get better and work on incorperating personals into your punches more. WP, CRACKA you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. multis, too bad i dont vote on multis, ok punch here Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... lmao, i liked this line here nice wordplay on both lines prob dopest punch of the battle so far I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. again nice wordplay, took some thought? ight-good punch Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** lol, i'm liking this wordplay ok punch though Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** lol, an ight punch, nice wordplay you had some nice wordplay alot more complex then blaze's i think, you had a couple of punches that took the battle for you, although i have to say i have seen better ight battle though...lol three stooges V/White Powder |
Voted For: Young Blaze
Wow...Young Blaze Murdered him Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays LOL 9/10 U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes Nice!! 9/10 U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's Good...8/10 U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers LMFAO 9/10 Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... Nice 8/10 Overall: 43/50 (86%) White Powder: you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. Weak...4/10 Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... Blah, coulda been worded better but decent...7/10 I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. Good...7/10 Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** OK...6/10 Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** No...3/10 Overall: 27/50 (54%) Weak verse from White Powder...Goin with Young Blaze...No hate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^ nice explanations.. that'll be removed.... probably.....
anyways.. uppin... |
Word to that...............................Uppin....
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This was feedback posted for White Powder
white powder gets this one. better lines. structure coulda been better though.
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Uh uppin for some votes...................................
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This was feedback posted for White Powder
Hmmmm nice battle here............Yo uppin for White powder
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Voted For: Young Blaze
Aii This IS What I Think YOung Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays Good concept :thumbup: U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes ....That Was aii... U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's .......Nuttin specail but nice U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers LOL Toothless hookers :roll: Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... ...................NIce:>................... Aii Basically I figured that you couldve done better considering who you are LoL but I guess you ddint have to bcuz of your oppenent you still take this battle to me jus look at my ending remarks Powder you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. ........That was coo Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... ...:nono:.....I wasnt feelin that way too much I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. That was def Played concept but the wording was jus different Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** THE 2nd Bar Was Sort of a BIT off of Lil Wayne "Go DJ" So That Was a DEF NONO You could get dqed for that Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** ..........You Lose.......... Aii man I Think That First of all Your lines were def to strecthed which mad eyour verse that much harder to read and then you put all the marks in your verse which made your structure sloppy and then you actually toke a lil bite off of a lil wayne song.....:nono: I def cannot give you my vote so Peace |
wow.. kid.. u think id bite little wayne... no buddy.. you gatta read the entire line... and aint none of you kids even know about the stooges.. but its explained enough.. soo im not gonna complain.. cuz i know young blaze would bitch fest it if i did... ty for the votes tho..
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UUUUuuupppiinnn.....an u dont want beef an u sayin ima bitch fest cause u came wack an cant see it......wow......Avoid me please an we will have a rematch jus cause i wanna merk u again.......
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