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Kirk 06-04-05 06:46 PM

catlungs!!!!!!!

PrahJect 06-04-05 07:23 PM

Yo I cant put this str8 this was amazin....OSB another hot one from u....drakel on point dogg.....this was soo hot.....10/10....OM OF THE FUCKIN YEAR.....RTF on my link in sig

Big City 06-04-05 08:06 PM

this joint was pretty hot, real complex and thorough. there was a lot of emotion in here, prolly due to the good metaphors in this joint. both of yall had some good flows and some nice bars in there. the only thing i was confused about was what the whole thing really was about, but other than that this was pretty hot. i give it a 9/10 should nominate this joint or somethin. the OG's are doin it up, nah mean

Kirk 06-04-05 10:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Dizzee Rascal
Overall an enjoyable read . respect

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Originally Posted by Non Capisco
10/10 in my book

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Originally Posted by eph
most def a nomination for something respective.

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Originally Posted by Os1ris
Overall 9.1/10 :thumbup: , Good Job Guys

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Originally Posted by .Barz Of Steel.
OM of the year right here IMO.

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Originally Posted by Joker the Maniac
10/10 in my books.

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Originally Posted by Drama Queen
Definitely open mic of the month right here! Dopeness defined...

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Originally Posted by Intermental
10/10....OM OF THE FUCKIN YEAR.....RTF on my link in sig

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Originally Posted by Big City
i give it a 9/10 should nominate this joint or somethin.

^look at that... LOOK!

King Solo 06-05-05 03:55 AM

OUCH!!! burnt my hand touching this piece........WERD

pure hotness!!!

the flow was off the hook like coat piles....
drakel had the better flow with his colossal amount of multies
the vocabs was dope like snorting lines....
the whole topic was nice
OSB had some real quality lines
i felt his verse lacked that little extra compared to drakel

overall 20/10....................

^^ yea i ride this OM like a dildo up tha ass-crack......

JKS!!!

9/10....

Kirk 06-05-05 01:06 PM

uppin..........

Germ 06-05-05 01:19 PM

wordness to this hotness

Kirk 06-05-05 05:51 PM

stop sleeping...

ric-b 06-05-05 06:06 PM

yo mayne u guys spit hott FIAHHHHHH keep it up both u drakel had better lines..osb u up there wit him.....showed good emotion and sick vocab 10/10 im wit intermental wit the OM OF THE YEAR SHIT.........keep it up fellas

Germ 06-05-05 06:13 PM

word, make sure when the awards go up for june, that you vote......!!!

feed is mos def appreciated :cool:

Trifecta 06-05-05 06:24 PM

haha no doubt mayne these people got u feedback galore.......but ta put my 2 sense in.....u have every characteristic needed to win the om of the month award mayne.....u spit hott lyrics everytime cant get much better.......keep elevatin even though ur at the top already.....i like readin ur stuff so keep postin my mayne 10/10

Trifecta 06-05-05 06:27 PM

hey drakel if u eva wanna do another collab p/m me, im trying ta get back on da site and get my shit straight and u seem like the guy to do it wit so holla at me iight? id appreciate it if u took up my offer......ponder bout that

Germ 06-05-05 08:35 PM

yeah, i'd be down, hit me up sometime

:)

Germ 06-06-05 08:12 AM

if your neighbours can't hear this better bump the tune

Sixth Sense 06-06-05 10:45 AM

very nice piece here very good flowed all over nice vocab use u could do just a little bit better come up with different words to rhyme wit, very vivid and good word structure as well,
everythin here was good but dont rhyme simple words u had a good vocab words in the lines but then simple ones for the rhyme so wok on that also

but overall good piece very good i give it a 8.0/10


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