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This entire piece was dope. I was feeling just about everything in there...you had some good emotion, nice structure, and a good amount of vocabulary in there too. But, some of ya shit seemed like it was forced in certain areas of the verse, just about everything else was tight though man. I was mainly feeling this bar the most..

He walks in, the silent makes him curious, but still he's a lunatic
Heavily breathing from his lungs to the nostrils. ooo he's so caustic

This had good imagery and I was feeling the emotion..dope shit right here.

Good overall piece Tweetlet.

^^ Thanx for the feedback bruh.........................Uppin.

I liked this piece, there was good imagery and structure, and as was stated it seemed a lil forced, but not too bad......imagery was the best though, really made you feel you were there, keep it up

Uppin to it's fucing Roof...............................

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really creative piece right here
i can see why u one of the best topical writers