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HOSOHSOHSOHSOH...go fuck your muma....................................

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

i'm gonna beat you,like i beat ur mamma
i dont mind if u fuck her, i no u wanna...
^^no punch...gay bar too
whats up wiv the michael jackson avatar...u no hes guilty
dis aint a game home boi...this is reality
^^nope, this was weak
is yo birthday really June 11, 1991..is that really true?
no wonder you suck and hav no crew
^^no point..
I dont hav a crew neither...i dont really care!
wen you sleep tonight ..i'll be ur worst nightmare!
^^nope, horrible
every1 knows whose gonna win this battle...
so y dont you just crawl into your baby cradle...and play with your baby rattle
nope^^terrible.
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you need elevaTION
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GreasedUp Hands Frum Da Lube Man, So Ur ''2 slick 2 handle''?
How U Ever Gon Be ''Jack Shit''?
BITCH! Ya Dont Even Have Da ''Elevation'' 2 Leap A Candle
^^lots of filler in this homie...not hard hittin
Slik?Added The L, Realized He Aint ''Sik' After Diz LOSS
Catchin Beat Downz
U Paid Da Mental & Physical Cost, But Styll Aint Da Boss
^^ok, but not hard hittin
Randy Moss? Nope. U Aint Never ''Backin'' Up Ur ''Linez''
Street Struggle?
British Kid ''Mixin Fruits'' In a Blender Is Hiz Idea Ov ''Da Grind''
^^decent
Talents Hard 2 Find, Believe..It Usually Dont Come In Pairs
Only Time ''All Eyez On U'' Iz ''Trippin'' Down Da ''Stares''
^^gettin better...nice punch
U Gotz No Authentiq ''FloW'' Ya Shitz Juz A ''Dub''[W][get it?]
Ya 2 ''slik'' 2 Be Tight, Datz Why U Cant ''Fit Da Glove''*
^^ok, not a bad closer
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you got this theres no need for me to explain nomore..

thank u can i plz get sum mo voterz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193153

^^ RETURN A FAVOR KHAOZ..........


GreasedUp Hands Frum Da Lube Man, So Ur ''2 slick 2 handle''?
How U Ever Gon Be ''Jack Shit''?
BITCH! Ya Dont Even Have Da ''Elevation'' 2 Leap A Candle
^^ Aiight, i like the wordplay here, good opener of a punch.

Slik? Added The L, Realized He Aint ''Sik' After Diz LOSS
Catchin Beat Downz
U Paid Da Mental & Physical Cost, But Styll Aint Da Boss
^^ Alright I like the personal punch you threw on here, the 2nd line was blah...but the 1st line was good.

Randy Moss? Nope. U Aint Never ''Backin'' Up Ur ''Linez''
Street Struggle?
British Kid ''Mixin Fruits'' In a Blender Is Hiz Idea Ov ''Da Grind''
^^ Meh i didnt like this bar at all, wasn't a good effective punch.

Talents Hard 2 Find, Believe..It Usually Dont Come In Pairs
Only Time ''All Eyez On U'' Iz ''Trippin'' Down Da ''Stares''
^^ It was an ok punch, could've been better.

U Gotz No Authentiq ''FloW'' Ya Shitz Juz A ''Dub''[W][get it?]
Ya 2 ''slik'' 2 Be Tight, Datz Why U Cant ''Fit Da Glove''*
^^ I like this decent punch with a wordplay. Good closer

Overall=I liked your verse man, had some few mistakes, but you pulled up. Had some good punches with some good wordplays....Meh keep it up, put down some more personals though.


Slik flow- I'm not going to even break down your verse, because it wasn't special nor good. Your punches was weak and played, and your structure wasn't good either. And Most of them punches you threw didnt even make sense

Like..

is yo birthday really June 11, 1991..is that really true?
no wonder you suck and hav no crew

^^ That didnt made sense at all :nono:


Conclusion= My vote goes to Khaoz Theory cause his punches was actually better than slik flow. Slik flow you had weak punches with no attemp of it effective. My vote goes to Khaoz because he threw down harder punches

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

way betta puches than slik flo and you got sum nice flow there, I liked it alot

slik flo got sum nice puches n´flow but didint come as hard as Khaoz so I think ma vote would go 4 him