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Voted For: Triple_N

Trip had a much bigger vocab and his structure was better.
Tweety had a good setup but it got distracting, i liked trips set up a lil more.
Tweety did not get in as much detail as trip did, he tryed too but lacked the vocab to do so.
Trips was just easier to relate to and seemed like the better choice.

v/triple N

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Voted For: Triple_N

Triple took this one in my opinion. I felt he had more detail to it, and it was more original. Tweety, your drop was too expected. When I read tha topic, I imagined in my head what tha drops would be like, and urs was something like what I imagined. You need to come off a lil more creative, and throw voters for a loop when they read. U gota give them something they aint expected. It's not a bad thing, just lost some points for that. but, i think triple took this one, because his drop was more complex, and intelligent. i felt he came off with better imagination, because of some of the sensory detail that he stated. this was a real good battle tho. i just didn't fall into it with tweety verse, mainly because of tha lack of good imagination. his verse was boring to me.

no hate to anyone in this battle. keep doin ya thang. my vote goes to triple.

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Voted For: Triple_N

aiight y'all both fam, but i'ma peep this shit:

Tweety, nice shit man. You had some good flow there. Fell off though at some time. You had nice imagery and meta's in there. Really made me thingk. good shit overall. Really liked it.

Trip, aiight. let's see. flow real good. Stayed good throughout whole shit. You had damn good imagery and meta's. Damn, yo. Really liked this shit. Liked that Ouch and arghhhhh line. haha.. good shit. really made me think.

overall, this was real good battle. real close and shit. But I think trip got it in the end. overall real good battle tho. pc one.

v/trip

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Voted For: Triple_N

hmmm, first i liked tweetys vocab, it was very extensive and clear, but that alone cannot win, cuz after the first paragraph it didnt even rhyme.. so i couldnt get a very good feel to it.. i think triple N had a good ending cuz it was just kinda painting tha picture for ya... and all his lines rhymed and had very good imagery to me... tweety i think took the vocab f'sho and also had very good imagery but i felt there was some iffy spots in it and it fell off cuz the first paragraph was my fav... trips was just one big block of story that had me interested the whole way thru... ima give it to trip....

vote/ trip...

y do u ask for votes if u just get them removed if they arent for u... dam..