Voted For: Young Dollar

k-trini i liked your verse. if you were going up against someone in a lower caliber then young dollar then you koulda won. but he killed ya with the shit you wrote to him.

young dollar i liked the opener. ending felt kinda like you just were tryin ta finsih. but on the whole definitly a nice verse.

v/young dollar

Voted For: K-Trini

-Young Dollar-
K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~
I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~
^^^^ 7/10 good opener.. good punch.. little bit of a played concept

Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~
He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~
^^^^ 6/10 not feeling this at all

Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~
Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~
^^^^ 7/10 first line is pretty much a cut-n-paste.. should of worded it different

Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~
i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~
^^^^ 8/10 ya best line.. good punch

True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight
Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight
^^^^ 6/10 weak closer.. weak punch

34/50 = %68


-K-Trini-
This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/
His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./
^^^^ 7/10 haha.. good opener.. lackin in the punch

Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/
Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/
^^^^ 9/10 hot bar.. hard punch.. good flow

Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/
Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/
^^^^ 7/10 ehh self-glory.. could of been better

My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/
I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/
^^^^ 6/10 weak

To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/
Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/
^^^^ 6/10 weak closer.. weak punch

35/50 = %70


-:No hate just honest opinion:-

Voted For: Young Dollar

K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~
I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~
Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~
He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~
Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~
Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~
Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~
i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~
True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight
Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight

Pretty Decent Verse, Few Iight Linez Dawg, Nuthin 2 Spectacular. Personalz Were Strong, U Juz Lacked Da Wordplay In Yo Punz 2 Really Come Hard [but u did enuff 2 get da win so its all good]


This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/
His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./

Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/
Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/

Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/
Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/

My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/
I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/

To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/
Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/

Not A Good Verse, Boring Disses, Closer Sucked Ass, Alot Ov Self Glory, No Personalz & Uncreative Punches, Flow Wuz Off Bcuz Ov Da Seperation Ov Yo Barz, Juz Wuznt Feeling Yo Verse

Vote=Young Dolla, Much Better Verse

Return Da Favor Or Vote Will Be Removed, Good Job Yall

Uppin for more votes Lets hurry up N vote for me so we can close dis bia

Voted For: Young Dollar

K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~
I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~

OK OPENER, PRETTY GOOD.

Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~
He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~

NICE PERSONAL, WITHOUTE THE QUOTE IT WOULD HAVE BEEN WACKED AND PLAINED, AND NOT FEELIN "MUSHY"

Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~
Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~

AGAIN NICE HITTIN PERSONAL...

Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~
i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~

MEH WAS OK....

True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight
Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight

NOT FEELIN IT...

________________________________________________


This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/
His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./

OK PERSONAL, NO PUNCH THOUGH.

Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/
Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/

NOPE, SO WHAT IF HE LETS YA TAKE A BREATH...

Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/
Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/

WTF.....NOT HITTING.

My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/
I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/

NO PUNCHES IN YA BARS, MAINLY FILLERS...HERE AGAIN

To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/
Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/

YOUR BEST BAR, WAS OK.

_________________________________________________-

TRINI, YOU ELEVATED...BUT YOUR STILL WACK ONE PUNCH (YOUR CLOSER HIT) BUT THE REST WERE FILLERS REALLY. STRUCTURE, VOCAB AND FLOW WAS PRETTY MINIMAL TOO.

YD GETS THIS DUE TO HIS PUNCHES HITTING, AND COMING HARDER WITH A LOT OF PERSONALS.

YOUNG, RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DQ'ED.

YOU HAVE 3 DAYS.

Preciate the votes lets end dis battle N bring da win back to Dollar

rtf man, honestly.


Or it WILL be DQ;ed!......

Ay uppin on dis battle RTF returned homie..........GIVE A NIGGA A WIN

Voted For: Young Dollar

Battle Was WEAK!But Young Came A Lil Better!
V/Dollar
_____________Explanation_________________---
K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~
I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~
^7/10
Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~
He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~
^7/10
Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~
Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~
^Sick(As in VOMITIN) LoL 6/10
Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~
i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~
^alright 7/10
True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight
Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight
^Alright 7/10
______________K-trini'z EXPLANATION_____________
This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/
His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./
^Kewl 7/10
Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/
Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/
^Umm Weak 6/10
Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/
Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/
^??6/10
My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/
I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/
^6/10
To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/
Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/
^WTF 6/10
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Opener:Dollar
Middle:Dollar
Closer:Dollar
Punches:Dollar
Vocab:Dollar
No Need No More To Say!Kewl Battle~!
[Size=4]RTF In my Link With XQUIZITLYRICIST]@yall!
OR THIS VOTE GETS REMOVED!