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Voted For: Daubs

Opionion: As soon as i finished reading K-Trini verse i knew this battle was over. Specialy when i know how hard daubs do things. It looks like he took it easy and still merked homie.

Flow- Was about the same Daubs was better cuz his words went easier with eachohter.

Punches- Daubs had alright punches and that hit hard
while Trini's was very very weak n really didnt have no point to them

Metas- were alright from what i could see

Personals- Didnt really see any personals other than what i thought was in Daubs first bar

Winner Daubs......he pretty much outmatched homie in all categoris........ Ups to both Mc's keep doing yall thang
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Voted For: Daubs

Daubs - Good spit, it flowed well and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - ..Newbie says he's elevated, well he cant be coz he aint even raised..
And the only time he's bad to the bone is when his skeletons plagued!!

Worst Line - NONE

K-Trini - That was iight, it flowed pretty well, but there wernt many hard punches.

Best Line - On this mic..........your'e anything but invinsible/
U "jock" so many cocks like you were the principal/

Worst Line - It's only right to start off saying that it was me who ran lauren over/
U couldn't bag her even if you stuck your molestered 4-leaf clovers/

OVERALL - One sided battle, Daubs took this with ease. His punches were hitten harder and he flowed alot better. K-Trini work on some harder punches.

Vote - Daubs

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Voted For: Daubs

This was extremely one sided,as far as content, structure and wordplay go i think Daubs had this one. Punchwise he didn't have to resort to hits below the belt to get his point across, as he still came stronger. I don't know who Lauren is but by the sounds of things Daubs must know her, and personally i don't really think that should be used as a punch. If it had been something less deep then by all means that would've been a decent personal, but i wasn't feelin that to be honest.
Daubs' flow was generally more interesting, while K-Trini kept it a bit too simple, in my opinion.
Lyrically K-Trini didn't really hit the spot, and that closing rhyme was uncreative to say the least. The line about him being anything but invisible doesn't even constitute a decent diss cos, correct me if i'm wrong, but wouldn't saying he IS invisible be more of a diss? as it would've implied that he doesn't get noticed in the game.
Anyway i liked Daubs' verse better because the way i see it, his punches were more clever, especially the closing line.

Voted For: Daubs

It's only right to start off saying that it was me who ran lauren over/
U couldn't bag her even if you stuck your molestered 4-leaf clovers/
4...damn, this was harsh!!! still though its a punch, a weak punch, concept was wrecked with the 2nd line.
You wouldn't be able to flow,even if ya practice at home/
Speackin to ya family and friends with a mini sized phone/
2...WTF!!! does this actually mean anything, this isn't even a punch.
On this mic..........your'e anything but invinsible/
U "jock" so many cocks like you were the principal/
3...weak, basic as hell and not even a punch.

OVERALL: 9/30


..Newbie says he's elevated, well he cant be coz he aint even raised..
And the only time he's bad to the bone is when his skeletons plagued!!
5...nice concept, seems kinda rushed though, as if ya aint put much thought into it.
And you cant rap for shit, get a song in your head and you just hum-it..
And you be rotating organs.........the way your skills turn my stomach!!**
6...decent concept, aint seen nuthin like it before, nice punch.
..After you called me out and i whored you, its time to swallow your pride..
And you could gauge ya verse wit an animal, and i still wouldnt bat an eye!!
5...ok punch, cud be better, i wasnt really feelin the setup to the punch.

OVERALL: 16/30


do i have to explain....
k-trini was way too basic and had no punches really. that one personal at the beginning that he wrecked.
daubs came pretty basic, one punch that was quite good, still enough to take this battle.....

V/ - Daubs

RTF!!! the R-Rated battle in my sig.....:thumbup: