Dizzee, please lol..

Now, uppin for more votes

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hot............................................... ........................good drop dizzie

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I think u took this dawg...str8 up...good battle though...I actually read both sides for once...lol

Man u know im not gonna except that lol
Break the verses down and give reasons and it will be excepted if not im getting it removed G

Actually nevermind it was only feedback...........

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Herb must be insane have this newbie praying for mercy g
Cus Diz will bring more 'shots' to pro-pain than intensive surgery
Good opener
Leave u murdered P, i love killing dicks i suppose im obsessional
'Legitimatly' smack this herb till he admits he's wack how we see pro-fessin-all (professional)
nice wordplay here
Recking all in my path, felt belidgerent beatings to witness my wrath
Have P 'bathing in his juices' like urination whilst taking a bath
ok nice line
Bitch like 'sickle cell twister', make the spine of pain twist
U punching? Ha! 'I assure' ull never reach me consider it 'pro-missed' (promised)
nice word play also
Why you still here? amazing im beating this snitch as i maime filler
My punches will leave ur 'limbs numb' no wonder im a pain killer!
ok an aight closer

v.s.

..Its like Im shooting Alph Alpha, Im leaving Rascal Killed..
...And Dizze? lll put an end to ya Daze(days) like Advil Pills..!
lol nice opener
..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!
ohhh nice wordplay heere
..Cocking triggers so when Im Snapping Back, Im Capping Cats..
...And Its like im abandoning country stars, the way Im leaving Rascal Flat..!
ok an aight line
..Ill be Spraying Whats Sickening to make you regret Everyday You Living..
...Cuz even when I was young spinning in cirlces, I was still Playing With Dizze..!
nah! not good
..Murder bitches and fags, Either way Im still Dropping Genders..
...Cuz Im leaving this hoe Mauled (malled) like prostitutes in Shopping Centers..!
lol nice closer


ok both did good to their verses but as u kno dizze came harder wit personals and punches and the flow will have to go to pro but dizze won the battle but good job to both competitors it was a close battle but dizze hit harder wit his punches
v/dizze

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Voted For: {Propain}

haha, Alrigh Alright this is how it breaks down

Rascal-You had some good punches cuz..nice wordplay too. Structure was a little off. It was a pretty tight drop but...

Propain-Came out swingin and landed with "..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!" I about pissed myself laughing, very nice punch. Came back with the Rascal Flats shit, very nice again..structure was off in some places but pretty consistent..

V-Propain
Reason:Both came hard with punches, but Propain took it...Pro had better structure and a better overall drop..your was pretty good too Rascal, but he has ya

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uppin for em and feedback that I think Pro took it with the punches..mad funny cuz

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lol at justfies vote being allowed but pen n papers not being allowed
awell
Im not fussed
Swooosh

Voted For: {Propain}

..Its like Im shooting Alph Alpha, Im leaving Rascal Killed..
...And Dizze? lll put an end to ya Daze(days) like Advil Pills..!

nice diss here, 6/10

..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!

nice use of his initials.. DR 7/10

..Cocking triggers so when Im Snapping Back, Im Capping Cats..
...And Its like im abandoning country stars, the way Im leaving Rascal Flat..!

iight i know ho rascal flat is lol so this is a good diss 6/10

..Ill be Spraying Whats Sickening to make you regret Everyday You Living..
...Cuz even when I was young spinning in cirlces, I was still Playing With Dizze..!

not bad, not tha best 5/10

..Murder bitches and fags, Either way Im still Dropping Genders..
...Cuz Im leaving this hoe Mauled (malled) like prostitutes in Shopping Centers..!

not bad not bad 6/10

overall not tha best battle ive seen but i saw enough from propain to get my vote - PROPAIN

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

decent opening ... first line was an ok set up, second line could have been better... wordplay=not bad, but feels kinda forced.. could have been executed better

3rd line= filler.. 4th line was decent, a lil stretched.. i thought the wordplay was creative, but better wording would have made it hit harder.. not bad though

5th line=filler/SG... 6th line was pretty funny lol.. pretty tight

7th line= tight set up line.. your best set up line yet... 8th line was blah... forced wordplay, the part you're playing off of isn't pronounced the same way as his name... wording was off and a lil stretched.. average

9th line.. blah, you talk about maiming filler when the line your using is filler... tenth line was a decent play off of his name

overall verse= 7.5/10

Unless ur the same person , the sick 1s vote aint counted if they jst breaking down pros verse but if it same it coo

Voted For: {Propain}

Alright, 1-3..

Uppin for more votes in this shit.