^^ thats the structure that works for me, it how I been writin since I started, and down south our style isnt about vocab....but thanks for feedin though

not bad....... not bad.....

nice emotions

flow was on point that's was makes the drop hot to me but honestly it was kinda long i aint read the 3rd verse but everything i read was hot str8 concept i wanna hear this audio

yooooooooooo man been a lonvg time mhows it vgoin.... need to tlk on aim sumtime n catcmh up aint talked 2 u in moooooooooooooooooooontmhs lol nice drop btw u aint lost ya touch

^^ yea, fo sho...hit me up... SlimThug1320