This was feedback posted for Pollo Deshuesado
thats a tie but pollo theres no way you got his girl on her knees no way!
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comon niggaz keep votin dont be lazy.........bump..
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This was feedback posted for SNE DAWG
...............Checkin Da Pollz...................
FEEDBACK FOR BOTH 1.Try to keep your flow and structure the same all the verse, cuz if you don't flow will be lost 2.Don't force RHYMES!!!! lol 3.Ya'll got good vocab but use it as multi's 4.Ur personals were good I liked that 5.good, good.... I can't vote cuz Me n Sne are of the same crew... so ... only feedback.. good battle |
Keep on votin....check out my part of the battle...peace
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vote niggazzz.....................................
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Aight keep on votin for me, ey.
Read my verse then vote. Thanks... |
Fuck It Niggaz Jus Vote!!!!.....................
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vote....................................whateva bump..
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Come on, keep on votin.
Check out my part of the battle on page 1. |
Voted For: SNE DAWG
this was honestly a sorry battle.... Pollo deshuesado - you definitely suck..u had no punches..u had no personals..the only plus on ur verse was that u posted it in time..seriously work on some punches and wordplay and personals cause thats what wins battles.....1/10 SNE Dawg - ur verse was almost as bad as Pollo's..you tried some wordplay which was cool..ur punches? definitely not..jus work on being creative with punches and sometimes the way you word a line makes it sound better.....1.5/10 SNE DAWG wins!!!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I´ll keep practicing, thanks dawg..................
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wtf...the muthafuckin votes are erased...!!!! shit this goes on again......jus keep votin then
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Vote my niggas...help a man out...
PEACE Read ma' verse... |
uppin for ya'll..........................................
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