nice piece overall. i liked the use of emotion and imagery (i was impressed by how well i could feel the emotion in this piece, even though sometimes i couldn't relate). kind of old to keep uppin' but i ain't mad at u. other than a couple flow issues it seemed like a perfect piece.

8.5/10 keep it comin'

word... will be doin it soon...

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