Voted For: Daubs

Breakdown...


Daubs:
Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
7/10...Tight 2nd Line
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
8/10...Liked Tha Set Up & Da 2nd Line Hit Hard
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
7.5/10...Set Up Was Good, Da 2nd Line Was Nice...Not Dat Strong Tho
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
6.5/10...Brought You Down, Glory? But Nice Either Way

Was Feelin Ya Verse, You Had Hard Hittin Punches A Few Personals (You Beat Him B4)...Structure Was Straight, Word Choice Was On Point...Nothin Really Bad About Ya Verse Except Da Closer Was Weak


E.C.
Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
8/10...LOL I Dont Know If Dat Was Humorous, But It Had Me Rollin
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
7/10...First Line Was BLAH, Set Up Horribly But Da Personal Was Tight
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
7.5/10...Again Ya 1st Could Be Worded Betta, 2nd Line Was Funni
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
6/10...Really Didnt Like This Closer Either


VOTE: Daubs....Both Closer's Were Weak As Fuck But Yall Middle Bars Were On Da Same Level, E.C. Brought More Humor & Daubs Came Wit Hard Hitters...Loved Da Loose Ends Line, Only Reason Daubs Got This Was Because His Openin Lines Were Worded Alot Betta Than E.C.'s...E.C's My Nig, But Jus Work On Ya Set Ups Ya Lines Tight But Da Set Up Kinda Takes Points Away....Tight Battle Tho Both Niggaz
RTF...Any Battle I Got Open

ight fam link me.. upin for more votes.............

Voted For: E.C

Ya know what this was a good battle. But i think E.C took this one. Don't get me wrong i thought Daubs' verse had a lot of humour in in with lines such as:

"Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!"

and

"Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ.."

but EC traded humour for a sick verse with better punches, and flows. I prefered ECs structure of his verse and i found it more interseting to read cos the humour was more subtle so you had to read it carefully to understand some lines.
I think the line that finally made me vote for EC is his closing line:

"How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,"

I thought that was a decent personal and all out nice rhyme.

So there you have it: My vote goes to EC

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Voted For: E.C


Quick verse
Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
^^ wack
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
^this aint really a puunch imo.
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
^^yeah thats more like it...
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^ur best bar


Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
^^nice personal lol
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
^^yeah, another good personal
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
^^ouch!
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
^^nah...not a good punch but a personal again...

No hate to any1 here, but E.C. takes this due to his use of personals and better punches! sorry daubs! no hate, 1

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Voted For: Daubs

breakin it dooooowwwnnnn...

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
^Alright... that was kinda wack... nothing in there appealed to me what so ever... but it was alright
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
^Also rather wack... no hate or anything but your verse kinda sucked
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
^alright personal, nothing all that good though, first line was wack
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
^Best bar in your verse

Well... Your verse was rather weak... I didn't enjoy reading it that much and nothing made me laugh and its always good to make the reader laugh... but um... 4/10



Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
^haha, first line was wack but made up for it with that funny shit...
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
^Decent... wasn't all too appealing but good
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
^good personal, very effective..
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^Only wack bar... Didn't like that at all...

Ok, Daubs wins this in my opinion because of his humor, shit was funny and his punches hit harder... E.C., yours was alright but not all too good and nothing that kept me reading.. (though i read it all)

wow... i feel daubs is getting robbed................

lol i feel im getting robbed aftwer that lol... o well uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

juz checking da pollz really nyce drop frum both ov u

few unexplained votes, ima get strobe to remove any shit ones :thumbup:

werd lol knew that was coming.... uppin for more votes.....

uppin for the last vote..............................