Stanza:

Your Piece Had Direction...You Took The Story and Kept With It and Thats Good, but You Lacked On The Other Three Categories. Your Imagery Wasn't Good..I Couldn't Even Picture What You Wrote, Emotion Was Not There At All, and Your Vocabulary Was Just Repulsive. You Gotta Elevate Man.

Devolve:

Aight, Your Overdueing Your Vocabulary Which Is Taking Away From The Feel of Your Topical Drop. Vocabulary Is Important, but It Has To Make Sense and Still Get The Emotion and Imagery Across. Your Direction Was Just A Complete Circle...You Kept Talking About The Same Thing, and There Wasn't Any Emotion. Just Elevate As Well.

My Vote - Devolve For Better Overall Topical Drop.

~R~