Hey, enjoyed it, loved the style and the wording you used, all flowed together, great job.10/10

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yep agen i gotta go wit d rest....... xcellent

flow was good , an even tho u had big words, u rhymed them well, an it all went togtha nicely.... good theme,rhymes,structure,emotion,imagery

keep droppin fire...... im givin dis a 9......~1~


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8/10. Overrated. Some of it was good, some of it was okay, I honestly didn't like the hook and I hate when people use the word 'strife', it seems so goddamned forced to me because it's a word no one uses but they just use it to rhyme. It's just a word to me that seems like you just use it to rhyme with 'life' or 'knife' or 'light' and it holds no special meaning, and in most OMs that have multis you have 'strife' in it. Your rhymes were predictable and your vocabulary wasn't all that. I didn't even bother read all of it because I hate reading most OMs, but I read some of this, so I can't say much about the concept, if it's about black and whites it has been used before.

And just RTF on something of mine, I might have something new out by the time you ever check this.

Shits real nice man 8/10 or maybe 9/10 good job keep it up man

Thiss was fuckin ill.

Mint imagery throughout structure was meh but still it flowed well, good vocab and was a deep topic, you pulled it off...good ish mate.

RTF on dead beat holiday or I'll fucking kill your animals.

yeah i gotta say it was gutta i liked it especially tha part of

Mankinds substandard spectacle... abundent with obstinate views...
Not seeing the distant delicacy with the naked eye...like forensic clues...
Like looking in the mirror...but what looks back is darker than white...
Therefore the blood that flows clearly deserves less quality of life?...
Skin disguised...but colour shouldnt be diverse through mans eyes...
Because the feelins under the skin feel the same pain when man crys...

str8 bananaz keepin write mayne 4 real u get a 10/10 on diz

Hey Look I Couldn't Get Into This, Eighter These Cats Are College Brats Or They Pulling Your Leg Th Evocab Was Elevated Beyond Your Audience And This Sounded Like A Dang Science Project About To Take Place( But Anyway Keep On Dropping Some People I Guess Liked It But For Me Very Far Fetched For Real