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This was feedback posted for King Solo
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werd..................uppin..............lets get votes...............
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uppin bitch nuggetz...............................
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Voted For: King Solo
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189064 Return the vote ^^^ Rollin with Livin’ Legendz proves that they show pity on a wack G.. Cuz I went and said “wicked is dope” and even M-Eazy slapped me.. ^^^ Openin line was mad forced, second line was a good punch. Kids feelin bad about himself…but hey, I can have ya spirits lifted.. Ya was born on Christmas eve…so at least ya was close to being gifted.. ^^ Really nice punch an personal Ya battles bring flocks of Indians…well at least they have up till now.. Cuz ‘wicked gets them wins’ and the onlookers are just like “HOW??”.. ^^^ your weakest bar... Wicked don’t try, his skinny ass wud evaporate if he broke a sweat.. Livin out there where its real…so he spends all his time on the net.. ^^^ pretty decent, nothin' like your first two bars tho' I think there’s been a mix-up…names have been switched around.. Cuz I believe its clear to everyone that its me who’s battling the clown.. ^^^ not, bad not bad, i ain't mad at that line, made me laugh... This kid gets merked…he don’t respond wit words but ‘gun crimes’.. Cuz this dude ‘claps back’…………………………………… ……… ……………………………….when he applauds his opponents rhymes.. ^^^ i was gonna say PLAYED, But for real....that punch in the second line was nice as fuck.. Dope verse, you killed it, few bars were weak, but for the most part, flow an punches hit they mark...good verse, you wrapped it up man Your mouth is runnin like athelete's foot and still peelin... Tried to "kick" his best delivery but Solo had no real feelin... ^^^ good concept, but the punch in the second line could of been harder hittin'.. Feel my bold demeanor I'm typin this laid back while I blow reefer... Solo couldn't blaze a track wearin Marion Jones sneakers... ^^^ naw, this was your weakest bar Fuck your crummy ass punches they're fake and deemed shitty... You the type a nigga that'll fetch a cheesecake for P Diddy... ^^^ it was straight, nothin' too dope tho' In fact you prolly already did cornball mascot for Making the Band... Doing the booty shake for a grand getting ass raped where you stand... ^^^ it was aight... I'm degrading you man in real life I'd chase you off the mic... Your rhymes are trash dude all you do is waste them on this site... ^^^ easily your best bar, you had a chilled out flow too the punch, an it mocked him, nice bar... U got 39 KO's?(HA!) my words are powerful like when a Reverend's preachin... Where's my hand job Solo? I'm the only one you've never beaten... ^^^ lol, nice In-consistant verse, you had like 6 lines in your verse that i wasnt feelin' at all....last 2 bars were nice as fuck, if you had more of the last 2 bars in your verse, you would of got the win....punches lacked creativity in places, an your wordplay was kinda basic, but decent drop, just be more consistant an set your whole verse out like your last 2 bars........ Vote-King solo RTF. |
Voted For: King Solo
Aii This is what It Is King Solo Rollin with Livin’ Legendz proves that they show pity on a wack G.. Cuz I went and said “wicked is dope” and even M-Eazy slapped me.. LOL At The second line The first line was aii Kids feelin bad about himself…but hey, I can have ya spirits lifted.. Ya was born on Christmas eve…so at least ya was close to being gifted.. LOL .....Thats Nice Ya battles bring flocks of Indians…well at least they have up till now.. Cuz ‘wicked gets them wins’ and the onlookers are just like “HOW??”.. ,,.......Funny...... Wicked don’t try, his skinny ass wud evaporate if he broke a sweat.. Livin out there where its real…so he spends all his time on the net.. ........Not All dat...... I think there’s been a mix-up…names have been switched around.. Cuz I believe its clear to everyone that its me who’s battling the clown.. ........Aii...... This kid gets merked…he don’t respond wit words but ‘gun crimes’.. Cuz this dude ‘claps back’…………………………………… ……… ……………………………….when he applauds his opponents rhymes.. ...LOL That was Good Overall i Think that You did an Good verse not Your best i Tell you that much but it was a good verse came with some punchez and they connected so Thats what I Like to see Wicked one Your mouth is runnin like athelete's foot and still peelin... Tried to "kick" his best delivery but Solo had no real feelin... LOL Good wordplay Feel my bold demeanor I'm typin this laid back while I blow reefer... Solo couldn't blaze a track wearin Marion Jones sneakers... ....The Blaze a Track concept ....played srry Fuck your crummy ass punches they're fake and deemed shitty... You the type a nigga that'll fetch a cheesecake for P Diddy... .....Seem Kinda poor on Concept but your ryming was str8 In fact you prolly already did cornball mascot for Making the Band... Doing the booty shake for a grand getting ass raped where you stand... ......No Direct punch here lets keep lookin I'm degrading you man in real life I'd chase you off the mic... Your rhymes are trash dude all you do is waste them on this site... ......Aii...... U got 39 KO's?(HA!) my words are powerful like when a Reverend's preachin... Where's my hand job Solo? I'm the only one you've never beaten... ....LOL That was Good Overall Man i Think You Really Lacked Good punchez in between your Open and ender But your opener and you ender was str8 with me but the rest was jus lacking good concept and hard hitting punchez srry RTF in any battle link in my sig please |
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This was feedback posted for Wicked One
checkinnnnnnnnnnnn tha mu fuckin polsssssssssssssssssss
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This was feedback posted for Wicked One
Both nice shit, good punches and personals from both...gonna be close, GOOD LUCK!!
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^^ You better look closely...............3-0........Lol Uppin.
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werd, this aint close..............................uppin :thumbup:
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Bumpin............................................
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and now we've had some votes...............the snore fest begins...............
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.....:thumbup: vote on this muthaphucka :thumbup:.....
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Voted For: King Solo
this is pretty ok battle. King Solo: The only problem I had was the liens were a bit streched but I have a sorta slow flow so I could of read it wrong. So I didn't let that count against you.The opener was a good personal and was funny.The line following that was even funnier and was actually quoteable.The rest was all so so around 7/10 type lines.So adding two 10's and your 7/10 you basically get a... 8.5/10 Wicked One. You seem like a freestyle type rapper.I mean when I read it,it felt like I was freestyling.To me you're an audio head doing text.i dunno its just me.Like last time you need to expand in personals nah mean?Its alot more effective that way.Anyway youre verse had good multis and flow but you need personals fam. King Solo/win Vote on any other battles you see with me and you get a sugar cookie. -one love- The Gifted kkube |
Voted For: Wicked One
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